Where is the raw link?

Good story. Looking forward to more.

Why are you reposting bound by knowledge?

Didnt mc say the magic warrior would achieve great feats later on in the story? Why is she is going to die so soon if he doesnt intefere?

Its dropped.

I dont see how the harem and romance tags are possible if the mc is this evil and rational.

If you could post a new chapter once youve moved that would be appreciated.

I would think purely from a biological standpoint a race with low reproduction rates would not look kindly on gay relationships.

Done

Join the discord server in my bio if you want to discuss more. Its difficult on here.

Its dissapointing for all the reasons ive stated. Having feelings for family is a part of it. I find the whole concept of a person with a family in past life taking new parents and siblings unbelievable. Imagine if one day you find urself living amongst strangers, can you call them mother, father and brother even if they treat you well? Author there are an infinite number of weaknesses one can have they dont have to be so predictable. Weakness of family and killing, are the most cliche ones used for heroic mcs.

All the issues I have with the novel author can be summed up in one statement. Keep your characters consistent. You treat the mc like a child in some cases and an adult in others. If he was a child I agree, he shud be hesitant about killing, not yet have a goal and require character development. But he is an adult whose lived in the world for 10 years.

I disagree. Wisdom path is used to deduce possibilities based on the clues and information one has at hand. Lang Ya had no clues and your telling me he blind deduced a new refinement method? If that is so one has to then question where the information came from. The only possible answer is heaven cause again he had no clues. Then compare this to what FY had to do to get answers from heaven.

This novel has alot of good. It reads nicely. The characters are decent and the setting is given its fair due but there are things about it I find puzzling. Many times I find myself wondering what role the spacefaring civilization bent on conquering the world serves. The mc has no problem annihilating them and the story so far has to do with the locals of the world. It feels like a missed opportunity or something added on after the fact to give the novel a different flavour. By making the mc so strong that the spacers are no threat to his conquest it renders their presence pointless. Why not just make this a hard fantasy in that case? Then there is also the nature of the time loop genre. By showing us the mc attaining his goal only to be thrown back to the beginning and being forced to change doesnt make for a very enjoyable read. Especially so as he starts a villain, where will he end in that case?

Deducing the mcs identity is believable but gaining the method directly from the heavens? Even FY had to steal peoples immortal ascension insight and use a dedicated killer move with a rank 8 core gu after fate gu was destroyed to do the same. This is a poor excuse for the mcs next fortuitous encounter.

Your explanation would be believable if the mc didnt already live 10+ years in the world. That is more than enough time to get used to the nature of the world. Also if you wanted mc to have character development maybe making him a 40+ year old reincanator wasnt a good idea. Thats a middle aged man. Thats your father. Tell me can your father go through character development? Someone like that shud already have an established personality and character.

Dissapointing. Mc is not a villain. He has feelings for his family and clan, going out if his way to ensure their safety. He doesnt have a goal and is blindly walking the path of cultivation. The world seems to revolve around the mc. His allies are people with the potential to reach the peak of the world and this is just in the first vol. The plot of vol 1 is also kinda confusing. The mc goes from a newbie, reluctant to kill person to genius level schemer by the end and we dont even see how or why.

Villain mc? He is tied down by his feelings and doesnt even have a clear goal. He is a headless chicken trying to chase the sun. Very dissapointing.

Isnt she an immortal? Why doesnt she have any special techniques in her memory?

The romance between yuxong and huang ling is so bad. Dont even know why mc paired them up together.