Seems like for the foreseable future the mc is going to be forced to follow the novels plot. I'm sure this is going to make for an enjoyable read.

Shame to see it happen but I had a feeling. Hope the authors next work lives up to their vision,

This novel has promise but its title worries me.

While you are more than allowed to hold the assumption an adequate solution will arise some time in the future dont try and force your way of thinking onto others. Jonams situation broke every pre-established rule regarding homunculli and while I do not expect to get the complete truth immediately, something satisfactory has to be offered in the meantime which didnt happen. Our difference of opinion simply stems from the fact that you are content to consume what is given to you without question while I cannot.

How did it move its core? Where did it's new vessel come from? Do none of these very basic questions come to mind or are you more interested in creating headcannon to cover up the plot holes?

Is the author going to address the main criticism of mcu thanos that wiping out half the life of the universe wudnt have fixed the overpopulation issue. Most species on earth can recover those numbers in a generation or two and alien species that have a similar reproductive cycle cud too.

Cause its part of the story. Were not talking about some trivial plot point that can be skipped without severly impacting the narrative. If the author was going to do this he may as well have made the mc be born in one of the leading clans. Instead weve been denied the opportunity to instead watch mc going around faceslapping everyone? Great, like we havent seen that already.

Dissapointing. Not only did the author skip the mc and his clans rise to power, its leaves so many open questions. Firstly why does the mc know how to make things like alcohol, perfumes and soap? And even if he does its nothing new to this world. Do you think people of this time period not have similar products, especially if theyre wealthy? And did the other clans do nothing to stop his clans rise in the handfull of years the mc was active? Hes only 12, how long could he have been at it?

There is something god granted us that is called freedom. He is merciful because he is willing to forgive us despite us humans exploiting his gift. Im sure you would much rather have the choice between good and evil rather than be a puppet on strings.

Thankfully he isnt.

Nysa's story really is too rushed. I do not expect someone whose grown up under her circumstances to all of a sudden bear notions of freedom and a newfound interest in things she was completely blind to like her servant's name. This honestly feels like a character arc that should be happening over the course of the novel instead of just the first arc.

Very likely and I'm going to hate every moment of it

How does a homunculus migrate to a new body? Smelling alot of plot armour here.

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If shadows are the twisted, dark memories of an individual if said individual has their memories tampered with the shadow would by association be altered as well. How is Bianors shadow untouched.

Dont really understand the logic here. Iphiclus told Nysa not to listen to anything Bianor says in hopes she wouldnt use hypnosis magic on Bianor? Why not just tell her not to use hypnosis magic then?

Read ch 2 again

All the reincarnates inherited their identities memories and fused with them. The fact that none expressed even the slightest thought of their parents is a big question mark and another example of the authors lazy writing. And im the one thats not good at reading apparently.

Plot moves so slow cause author is more interested in showing what every character other than the mc is doing. Also what's the point of coming to this universe if the only thing the fic revolves around is non canon additions to the original plot.

Ai slop