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NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthPostedShameless author 5 star Anyways enjoy my novel and have a good day/night. You can ignore what's below as it's kinda just me waffling. Just like other reading this novel,I am an avid fanfic enjoyer and have attempted writing my own multiple times with large promises and ideas. Though this time it will be different as I will try my best to finish this, even if it means I take large breaks I will come back. Anyways I was inspired to write this after I saw another fanfic which also had a Zaraki and I think it had Kenpachi as an MC or sum. But I kinda got turned away from the book by the OC Dojutsu called the Mugengan which granted infinite chakra with its most developed stage giving you infinite chakra permanently. Tho I might give it a try again if I find it
- NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthReplied to nikita_vdovin
maybe, maybe not👀
"You're going to have a playdate with Sasuke tomorrow, his birthday is coming up and it seemed like his mother would like to have a party with a few allied clans before his official party" - NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthReplied to Left_Nut_Of_Madara
I completely agree, I do have plans to make sure everything makes sense and the chapter will also be proof read and so on. But do remember as this is an AU you have to be ready for some characters to change.
Ch 2 Chapter 2 (Please read my authors note at the end!) - NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthCommented
Looks like a young Zaraki except with long hair
The young figure across him strained his neck up and stood against the mountain in front of him. His features an immature copy of the man in front of him, he tightly gripped the wooden sword in his hands and took a deep breath out. - NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthCommented
His mom basically looks like Unohana
After I finally reach the living room where my mother was, I gently knock on the door and await a response. - NOT_EVEN_MAD10mthCommented
Isshin
The training grounds were drenched in the warm glow of the setting sun as Kenji, a young child, clutched a wooden practice sword tightly. His father, Isshin, stood tall towering above the young child standing across him, his black cascaded down his back and gently swayed in the wind. His chiseled facial features commanded attention, while his broad shoulders exuded strength. A presence that demanded respect, his stature and striking appearance left an indelible impression on all who crossed his path. His stern gaze fixed upon his eager apprentice - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to The_Odyssean
it covers his eyes, kinda like a domino mask
The house I was hooked up with was also good, it was a modest 2 bedroom 2 bathroom house with a decent-sized living room and a garage. They also installed a secret closet where my costume was since I was going to be an interim hero. The costume was a black bodysuit with silver accents on the inner part of the elbow, it also had a part which covered up my eyes and my chin leaving my mouth exposed. If I had to admit, it was a pretty cool suit, though these heroes did have a weird obsession with bodysuits. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to Kyl_Grace
limit breaker
In the clear night skies of Metropolis, a crack in Space and Time appears. From this crack a man emerges, the man in question stood at 180 cm with chalky white hair and lightning crackling from his body. He was dressed in a blue vest outlined with yellow lines with an employee badge on it reading "Kibong Kim". He had plain denim jeans on alongside grey trainers. His piercing blue eyes looked around until they suddenly widened as he seemingly ask to no one in particular. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to King_Of_SpaceTime
bro what
Tina on the other hand was one of the harder people to become friends with as she mostly kept to herself. Tina had dark brown dreads, she stood on the shorter sides of things at 160 cm tall being just shorter than Sam who was 166 cm tall. Tina had an alluring face and was probably one of the most attractive people I've seen, not as attractive as Diana but she was quite close. Her chocolate brown skin complemented her hazel eyes. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to LycarusCh -2 Powers
- NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to Master_Cheif
thanks for saying it in a concise and non-degrading manner. I understand your complaints as someone who also read fanfics. I couldn't necessarily get him to act like the MC from Limit Brealer because I thought it would be hard to make the fic more enjoyable as I'm not good at writing stoic type MC's. I also found it fitting that he said everything due to his mental distress at the time. Once again thank you for saying it in the manner that you did and have a good day.
"I think I have some sort of idea on how this might have happened", I said. I then told her about what happened, how I was working at the convenience store until I felt an earthquake explaining my employee get up, I then told her how when I went out of the store how monsters were running rampant and how I got transported to the awakening space and was stuck there for some time. I then told her I got strong enough to break out but when I left the crack I was in another universe. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrReplied to M_e_t_a
uhh, basically. He's figured since he has the power to help out he should. He doesn't want other people's mother to go through the same pain as his did
The house I was hooked up with was also good, it was a modest 2 bedroom 2 bathroom house with a decent-sized living room and a garage. They also installed a secret closet where my costume was since I was going to be an interim hero. The costume was a black bodysuit with silver accents on the inner part of the elbow, it also had a part which covered up my eyes and my chin leaving my mouth exposed. If I had to admit, it was a pretty cool suit, though these heroes did have a weird obsession with bodysuits. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrCommented
What I've basically done is take the beginning of Limit Breaker but instead of going home he comes to another universe, so the Limit Breaker story won't have much relation to this fanfic except a few elements from there will appear here. If I did not answer your question properly just comment again
Ch -2 Powers - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrCommented
what it looks like
In the clear night skies of Metropolis, a crack in Space and Time appears. From this crack a man emerges, the man in question stood at 180 cm with chalky white hair and lightning crackling from his body. He was dressed in a blue vest outlined with yellow lines with an employee badge on it reading "Kibong Kim". He had plain denim jeans on alongside grey trainers. His piercing blue eyes looked around until they suddenly widened as he seemingly ask to no one in particular. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrCommented
stage 1
The house I was hooked up with was also good, it was a modest 2 bedroom 2 bathroom house with a decent-sized living room and a garage. They also installed a secret closet where my costume was since I was going to be an interim hero. The costume was a black bodysuit with silver accents on the inner part of the elbow, it also had a part which covered up my eyes and my chin leaving my mouth exposed. If I had to admit, it was a pretty cool suit, though these heroes did have a weird obsession with bodysuits. - NOT_EVEN_MAD1yrCommented
base
The house I was hooked up with was also good, it was a modest 2 bedroom 2 bathroom house with a decent-sized living room and a garage. They also installed a secret closet where my costume was since I was going to be an interim hero. The costume was a black bodysuit with silver accents on the inner part of the elbow, it also had a part which covered up my eyes and my chin leaving my mouth exposed. If I had to admit, it was a pretty cool suit, though these heroes did have a weird obsession with bodysuits. - NOT_EVEN_MAD2yrReplied to VoidShifter
Thank you for informing me about my mistake.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NOT_EVEN_MAD2yrReplied to ObamaUchiha
Thank you for taking time out of your day to give my story a chance. Have a good day :)
I decided that before leaving this island I'm gonna get used to the fruit's powers and also learn Soru and Geppo and maybe Tekkai so I can better defend myself against attacks like the Guardian's flying slash attacks. I also started experimenting with my fruit and Its different powers. Firstly I tried using omnireceptable, the power to turn all of creation as my weapon. I smash apart a rock and let my aura control all the smashed pieces, I tried moving the pieces further and further away to see how far my control extends and felt myself lose control of the pieces when they were 10 metres away. I also wanted to see how much fine control I have over the pieces so I tried making them make a humanoid form but I quite struggled with that. "Seems like I can only make basic movements with them so far, nothing a bit of practice won't fix." I think.