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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to Ethel_Imaginations

    Will main character meet with his daughter and wife again in future? Well this is mainly going to be spoiler. Author pleas keep up the great work. 馃憤馃憤

    Regressed Reincarnation: How to Escape a Fantasy World!!
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 56 Chapter 54: The Hunter, Prey and the Bait.
    Harry Potter and the Child Of Calamity.
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 15 The Abandoned Prince
    I Hate Systems
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Posted

    Okay so here is my review about the story Updating stability : Excellent. Writing Quality : Nice and simple, Almost no Grammertical mistakes and writing capability of author is improving with each chapter. World Background: Can't say much since it is at start only. Story Development:Nice and good plotline though inspired by "The Novel extra" , but few things are better than that novel like Time being given to develop side character, one of the negative point of THE is it was all about main character, each chapter becoming main character this and that and did not have a satisfactory ending. Few advice from me to author though please refrain from giving way too many skills to main character reader tend to forget if there are way too many skills in mc disposal and becomes confusing. And most important of all sometime main character need to suffer a loss too. Mainly because we know that a main character who always win becomes plain boring. Character Development: Main character : Firstly I need to tell that he is not very righteous. Biggest example of this is hollberg massacre where he let innocent children die to achieve his goal. So he is not my type of ideal main character where I prefer Smart and righteous type of main character like Mc of Lord of Mysteries. Second he is somewhat a type who wants basic control over everything now this exactly is not negative point but not exactly a positive point too. Since if something changes he somewhat seem to me type to panic (This is my opinion though can be wrong) Few positive point are High battle Iq. Know his weakness and strength He is smart And many more As for other side character they are good. That all for review overall novel is going very good and Author please keep up the good work.

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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to Entrail_JI

    Author sama will there be Angels and god in story?

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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Author if I am not wrong Prometheus was given a very big punishment of being his liver continuously eaten by vultures, maybe he got himself out of it.

    Ch 35 Prometheus, Titan of Humanity - Elysium(2)
    How-not to be an Olympian God!
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 80 Galxicus [3]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter author sama

    Ch 79 Galxicus [2]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thank for the chapter author sama

    Ch 37 Dungeon
    Reclaiming the Demon's Curse
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter author sama

    Ch 77 Homecoming [4]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to NULL_MONARCH

    I hope not.

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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter Author sama

    Ch 73 The weak [4]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter author sama

    Ch 72 The weak [3]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter author sama

    Ch 69 The massacre of Hollberg [4]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to Entrail_JI

    Thanks for the reply I understand why he did it, I am interested how he will react with Kevin seeing him in that state since undoubtedly he can't defeat Kevin maybe erase memories of Kevin by red book

    Ch 68 The massacre of Hollberg [3]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Author sama thanks for the chapter. Am I the only one who think Ren overdid this somewhat, he directly did this to direct heir of a powerful person, just imagine if Jin takes it negatively and rather than going after him he goes after his family, rather than Jin he will end up becoming a chesspeice. This monarch indifference is truly a dangerous means very very dangerous it made him not to consider his family . Well we are only hope Jin will target Ren not his family otherwise the main reason mc decided to stay hidden will go in vain Anyway Mc be like I hope this doesn't come and bite him and the next moment Kevin enter and sees him Well we can only burn a incense stick for Main character now and pray

    Ch 68 The massacre of Hollberg [3]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to Entrail_JI

    That would be a hilarious paradox.

    Ch 67 The massacre of Hollberg [2]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Replied to BlueBlutterfly

    Oops I made grammatical mistakes 馃槄馃槄

    Ch 67 The massacre of Hollberg [2]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Author sama thanks for the chapter and sorry for having a blasphemous thought (LOL)that What if the one who killed Jin is Ren dover itself ? Anyway I can see a good development for Jin, maybe he will stop looking down on other and do a thorough reality check on himself This chapter is no doubt a very good work Keep up the work author sama

    Ch 67 The massacre of Hollberg [2]
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  • BlueBlutterfly
    BlueBlutterfly2yr
    Commented

    Firstly thanks for the chapter author sama My opinion though mc made a mistake in keeping quiet about hollberg massacre, like many might say that who will believe him at all or no one will believe him etc but just like in tea party thing he could have said about the incident through his connection in black market to concerned people without revealing his identity at all. Though my opinion Because I am somewhat seeing a contradictory mindset in mc like he is not able to come in terms with himself killing other people but he somewhat allows the villains to kill children of 16 years just for so called development of novel's main character which I feel he could have avoided it More points which I remember that mc discusses in one of the chapter how mc judges parker's head is villain as he is Assassinating the children of 16 years but he himself allow it to happen it to happen so the question arises how will he judge himself as a villain worser than Parker or simply as a author who will keep giving excuses like this is important for development of character in novel, etc . Though the death of Jin was the best twist seen as I can see mc might try to change the outcome. Now in my opinion plot is becoming better with each chapter but mc has downgraded in my opinion.

    Ch 66 The massacre of Hollberg [1]
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