Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV
The Author's POV
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...and we finally reached the climax of the trip! For those of you that have read till the end, I am sorry for the cliffhanger. But, with this being the climax of the trip arc, the following chapters will too have cliffhangers in them. This is so that I can keep the tension throughout the whole climax part of this arc. Quick disclaimer. Monarch indifference will be in the third person. Do you like it that way or do you want to see it in the first person? I did it in the third person because I wasn't really sure how to write the thought process of an emotionless person. Well, if you ask for it, I'll deliver it the next time the opportunity presents itself
Firstly thanks for the chapter author sama My opinion though mc made a mistake in keeping quiet about hollberg massacre, like many might say that who will believe him at all or no one will believe him etc but just like in tea party thing he could have said about the incident through his connection in black market to concerned people without revealing his identity at all. Though my opinion Because I am somewhat seeing a contradictory mindset in mc like he is not able to come in terms with himself killing other people but he somewhat allows the villains to kill children of 16 years just for so called development of novel's main character which I feel he could have avoided it More points which I remember that mc discusses in one of the chapter how mc judges parker's head is villain as he is Assassinating the children of 16 years but he himself allow it to happen it to happen so the question arises how will he judge himself as a villain worser than Parker or simply as a author who will keep giving excuses like this is important for development of character in novel, etc . Though the death of Jin was the best twist seen as I can see mc might try to change the outcome. Now in my opinion plot is becoming better with each chapter but mc has downgraded in my opinion.
Woah.. Just because of Author MC's intervention during Amanda's arc, Jin died. Kevin pressured Jin and now Amanda pressured him too since Jin thought that she's the one who killed a D rank. Since he overworked his training, he collapsed. Since he collapsed, he's defenseless against the assassins. Well written author-san, keep it up!
