Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

The Author's POV

Entrail_JI

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ZayDenLv1ZayDen

This plot was too forced so here's the logic, MC went to the dungeon with the lowest tax possible in the list so a lot of people should've gone to this dungeon and this company who can stand toe to toe with both government and the union surely have their own professionalism they won't care if someone died in the dungeon but they would surely pay attention if somehow the mortality rate was too high

1yr

ArkageLv15Arkage

Hey let's check out that ominous, foreboding and evil looking castle! Said no one ever.

2yr

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Otaku_Demon1412Lv12Otaku_Demon1412

a black castle in the middle of a dessert dungeon, it obvious spell the word 'boss' just by looking at it, and yet MC went in. he clearly overestimated himself.

2yr

Uchiwa_MadaraLv14Uchiwa_Madara

That was so obvious he would meet the demon x)

2yr

InvisiblevoiceLv6Invisiblevoice

MC: I'll be careful! *MC enters dark ominous black castle while knowing there is a demon in the dungeon.* MC: Oh no. Me: *Holding my forehead in exasperation* Why are you like this...

2yr

Entrail_JIAuthorEntrail_JI

Double chap today

2yr

josh183rdLv14josh183rd

That can't be good

2yr

MaaosLv4Maaos

looks like it's the demons death day

2yr

OTSLv4OTS

2yr

TelalareadLv2Telalaread

what are the freaking odds mc encounter this. he is not even a protagonist. Please i beg of you stop forcing plots. Plots should be naturally/ subtly intertwined with mc journey. I bet if there is no sandstorm, mc would randomly walk and encounter this castle. This is called forcing plot.

2yr

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Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

Why did he enter in? It was so obvious that it was the demon's castle

2yr

tortleLv3tortle

Mc: Saving the ppl and wasting my resources wasn't useless because now I know there's a demon here, so I should escape. *proceeds to ender a black castle with dark vibes* Yea it would have been helpful if you weren't stupid.

2yr