Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Actually hated reading this. These arcs never fail to make me detest reading the story that I love reading otherwise

Honestly after all the grief you get for biggest part of your chapters these days i thought youd have learnt what your readers liked this was terrible.

I'm honestly just skimming this until it's finally over. I hate this arc.

this seems forced

No comment since everyone is bashing already.. what im to do is thank you bringing us another chapter, others might not like it but for me every chapter you release is a gift since its your story. We readers are all just here for the ride.

So Fictiononlyreader, your fanbase already stated how they hated the Sins Arc and you saw and admitted it and yet you are using it now; considering that u admitted yourself that will finish the novel with canon cuz u cant see yourself writing about hp world without the assist of canon, how lately novel is flickering between boring and interesting like a stock market and forced use of an arc that if not all your base, the majority of it hate to progress your story; IMO, I guess I can say the author is already burnout and dont care about reader base anymore and is going with the story as he likes just for the sake of gratification of getting it completed

Does someone remember how many chapter have been released that are about the freaking sins? Like the first sins arc plus this one?

So the author asks for advice on how other people might have written the Sin part to maybe make it more enjoyable then proceeds to ignore all of the suggestions and continue it in the cringiest way possible. If it was from an outside perspective as he's slowly dealing with each of them it could have been a fun guessing game of what Sin is he dealing with now based on other characters viewing his current actions. It would help the arc feel more engaging and while still, a pretty annoying arc would likely have less backlash than this. I get that he's meant to be going through all of this to grow. But it feels more like a bratty kid that we know never learns (looking at you time-traveling future self.) and it just feels so fake that it detracts from the story. His inner self is so pathetic that it's just hard to even root for him when he's acting like this despite how old and mature he is meant to be mentally.

Thanks for the chapter! While some people hate this and even if I do not agree, I understand them. So I will be the other part of the comments. It's your story. If you like it like this then keep writing.

Was it nice author? Was it nice that all the changes you made, the characters you've created and the relationships you've formed throughout this story had bare fruit on this SINS? Doing all of this for a character development that won't even matter in the end is nice right author? Hope you have a wonderful future author.

What made you think He would end up with Ivy after this? Like he said this is ruining his life, he dated Daph by his own free will and anything that is connected to the curse should be a no go to him after he break it. After everything he would just go off breaking all contact with Ivy because the truth is "she kiss him", he didn't ask for it or initiate the contact, the only thing he did was be nice and supportive to her. Her getting him is rewarding her terrible behavior and deeds whit what she wanted. If the genders were reverse Ivy would have been seen as a aggressive third wheel trying to break up a perfectly fine relationship.

I knew when the son had green eyes that he wasn’t gonna end up with daphne. I just wish the reason why wasn’t so predictable. It’s your story in the end but most commentators just dont like Ivy. I don’t mind her but you doubled down on the fan hated sin arc and now you’re gonna ship the fan hated oc? I love 90% of the story. I loved the kuroko no basket story as well. I think that the author is great at writing. But these closing arcs are not it. I just hope the author keeps writing and isn’t burned out by the backlash. Even if it’s not this story.

It's fun to read all the burning ones complaining about a fantasy XD I didn't stop laughing when I read the chapter, personally I like the events, it adds flavor to the story.

I really dislike the way you did this. Getting temporary alternate personality to progress relationship in such a way is a cheap shortcut. And that's even when I like the idea of both of them.

this again

So tired of this arc.

Yeah im done with this novel. So dissapointing. I did not like all the vault chapters but that was still fine. However all of this multiple personalities and different sins made this otherwise good story unbearable for me. For all of you that stay i wish a good time.

not gonna lie to you chief, I skimmed past this one and maybe the other once that will be released until this love triangle thingy is done :v

bruh...