In life it is impossible to please everyone. Just write what you want and what makes you happy. Since, it is that passion you put into your writing that drew everyone in, in the first place. Just know that your novel is a banger!! đ
its a shame that the passive skill is temporary. Maybe there should be a hidden condition he can fulfill to make it permanent. As its pretty much become a part of his personality since chapter 1.
This is the best Harry Potter fanfiction to date. You have indeed done a wonderful job that would surely make J.K Rowling proud. Well done on this accomplishment of finishing your book and all the best to all your future endeavors.