Comments of chapter undefined of The Legendary Junkmaster

Author Super intelligence may seem like a great ability but in writing its terrible You need super intelligence to actually portray it In writing I'll read another 20 chapters before giving a review. I'd advise you to change mcs ability to something easier to write about Typical gamers ability would be better, they tend to come with AI's, a map function, description of people, beings or items previously encountered, etc etc

Okay, now that 9 chapter set up was way too long and painful, while the sudden system made by smart-him is much too big a leap, I mean, knowledge for advanced AI, electronics, cybernetics and whatnot doesn't simply come from nowhere. I thought this was a solid read at first, but now... I'm out.

it doesn’t make sense, Mc may have acquired superintelligence, but that doesn’t give you knowledge of something you’ve never seen, really ... he shouldn’t even know what an AI is.

Take it out and recode the A.I.

Alright I was happy until it turned into another system novel.

Why do authors like making sassy A.I. Who behave rudely to their weikders/masters/creaters. It's offputting, they are so annoying, every sentence that they speak is cringe, annoying and disgusting.

Female AI ... I go out every time it's unhealthy in addition to the fact that he does not say anything to the made who speaks badly to him ...

okay, I think I'm liking where this is going. we gonna get cyborg mc?

AI building is ok but where did it learn the speech patterns and mannerisms etc.eventhough it's connected to his mind. it's impossible to learn something that's not already in his mind ryt?.

It is clear his ability isn't super intelligence. There is another person helping in the shadows. Who killed the banka monster thing? Who cured his grandfather? I bet the system is lying to him. I think he has the ability to process information from electronic components, which is why he knows these things. Or maybe he is literally just a pawn being used to mature the system. Maybe blue eyes are his real mutation. I love the story and the mystery. Keep it up!

Thanks for the chap

👍

super intelligence created an AI that insults himself yes super intelligence