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The similarities are very clear, in both the MC drags the friend/brother into baseball, they both play on different teams in high school, the friend/brother plays the catcher position, the MC ruins his shoulder(due to your system he fixes his shoulder), both have him pitch southpaw, the shy girl becomes the manager in both, she becomes the wife in the anime, not sure about your book yet. The catcher he has now is the little guy in the anime too, the plots follow pretty much the same, without the system it would pretty much be Major…
Another thing that doesn’t make sense is he has a messed up shoulder and the system tells him to do pushups, as someone who also messed up my shoulder the pain of working out is really overwhelming…
And you got the basic “trash” fire element, would have felt bad for the MC but he will just get plot armor, so he’s not all trash.
What happened to the bloody hole in the left chest?
It’s 30 thousand and he doesn’t know about the prince having a grudge against him because that girl hasn’t been found so the prince wouldn’t be after him yet.
Why didn’t it double like every other time? Stupid plot “holes” armor…
If you go back and read he only mastered them 1 time but picked cultivation over the knowledge, then he picked up that other move, he never actually went back to learn the saber moves again.
No it won’t because you will prioritize your martial level and nothing else, which will increase the price.
Maybe if your saber technique was better you could jump ranks and kill but a loser who only relies on his cultivation is ultimately just trash.
No it’s not
Lame, lame, lame, lame, Lame, LAme, LAMe, LAME!!!!!
So what is exactly wrong with the MC making those pills? He has used pills he made from the formula given and nothing happened to him so how would he be a scapegoat?
Beta not alpha
Wasn’t he there over watching it?
Shouldn’t you mean high maintenance dog? His whole build is a money sink.
Really…. So another fight with “genius” rich kid again.