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VicL2yrCommentedYeah, I rewrote the last few chapters. It just didn't seem to fit right, so... here's the rewrite version.
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Marcy and Kate should be girls’ names
"By the way, Audrey, your husband can't be Kate. It's helpless, but I hope you can accept this reality." - VicL2yrCommented
...dice rolls? I'm out.
[Cultivation Potential: Extremely Bad (Click to roll the dice)] - VicL2yrCommentedCh 28 Pill Formula SucceedsdetailCultivation! My Augmented Statuses Have Unlimited DurationEastern · Turtle Shell and Hemp Rope
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'totally depended on luck' - I saw that and decided to immediately quit
He acquired a system. It was quite simple actually. He had to complete the mission provided by the system so that he could get points. These points could be added to anything just like skill points of a game, but the outcome totally depended on luck. - VicL2yrCommented
If you're wondering what happened, I got vaccinated and these days I'm super weak... plus I got caught up in something else I wanted to try writing...
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Remian went POOF
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It's about how forgettable she is, and it keeps piling up.
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...yeah, should have expected that. Definitely disappointed here, I'd still rather Gloriana and Aisling exchanged places in all events from the start, but we know enough about the author by now to expect nothing less. Maybe it's my mistake for rooting for the right girl (IMHO) from the very start. It seems here is where I drop this. I'm half-tempted to write my own version of Mech Touch as an alternative, but it's probably not worth the trouble.
Ch 2693 Value of a Mech Designer - VicL2yrCommented
Of course not. Their attack only kills brains. She doesn't have any.
"I am not afraid!" - VicL2yrCommented
Aisling, your biggest mistake was kidnapping him instead of seducing him. If you just had the right timing and occasion, simply wearing a short skirt could have had him at your side and on your side long ago. But obviously, the author wouldn't allow it, so...
Letting Ves go was one of the greatest oversights she had ever made. If not for her inability to bring her back to the Warsaw Giant System, she could have prevented him from introducing the power of glows to the Hex Army. Without glows, the aggressive and overconfident Hexers would have never been able to overrun the hinterland of the Carnegie Group and the Vermeer Group! - VicL2yrCommented
Why does he sound like dinner...?
"…Oden Flit!" - VicL2yrCommented
...just how big is this so-called 'village' of theirs??
Therefore, this must have been a huge decision for Jonah and the other two children's parents. After all, there were quite a number of children in Magical Beast Village, but the only ones who really had the courage to send their children to take part in the magic assessment were just these three families! - VicL2yrCommented
Here's another girl needs to add stats to intelligence
"I don't care! I am still going. I, the number one beauty in Stone Hammer, refuse to believe that I can not steal a married man away from his wife. Only Creige is worthy of me. He is the most handsome man in all the kingdoms. No one compares to him." This beautiful wolf girl was Filina, the girl who tried to make Creige hers only to be ruthlessly tossed out the front door and into a wall. That day her people had to peel her body off the wall and bring her back to her home to be healed. She had spent all this time in bed dealing with her injuries. Now she was almost fully healed and wanted to attempt to once again try to seduce Creige. - VicL2yrCommented
Wait, you knew this was coming and you're only now starting to fortify?!
"That is why we will do the same. It has been a long time since we have any fort towns at our borders. Since they wish to build a fort, so shall we. One thing you have to understand. When the Yuthia theocracy was just formed, they were still hungry for more land. At the time, the east side of the theocracy used to be a small kingdom that bordered the empire called Horliam. The problem was, was that if the theocracy actually attacked another kingdom, the empire had threatened to step in. So in order to get Horliam to initiate the attack, they had begun building forts along the border. Instead of building forts of their own, they made the choice to attack instead. It ended with almost 70 percent of their forces being killed and the annexation of their entire kingdom. Because the Horliam kingdom attacked first, the empire did not step in to stop the theocracy. - VicL2yrCommented
To begin with, both of you ran off unprepared. Whatever happened to equipment and supply preparation? Healing potions? Armor? Don't tell me you can't afford it now.
She never thought a day would come when someone close to her would be hurt this bad. Kana clenched her fist. 'If only I were faster! If only I got there a few minutes earlier!' - VicL2yrCommented
No, that's not farming. Kana was farming. Ceilie was attempting suicide.
"Jansil, please save her. She was attacked while farming alone in the forest." Kana's tears rolled down her face. She was trembling from head to toe. She had not known Ceilie for long, but Ceilie was now her important family member. She did not want her to die!