Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

Anyone else find it creepy to call olivander “master” just thinking about it made me shudder.

It feels like the author gave up using proper English and it is just making the chapters unreadable without care. Feels like I am reading MTL

The parents reaction was kind of bland. Even if they knew something weird was going on with him, you just don't send your child out with a total stranger for shopping.

This whole chapter was too rushed It felt like a narration instead of a proper story.

why didn't his "parents" go with them?

What the hell happened to the properly written english from chapter 1 and 2? feels like I am reading an MTL or bad translation by a non-english speaker. The ****?

man I tried with all my strength to read this, but I can't get it very confused and poorly structured, things just happen and that's it, without explanations sometimes, my opinion, continues your good work

McGonagall wasn't very helpful at all. The whole outing was super fast

Why are his parents so calm about this? Also no interaction with his older siblings?

Me, a MTL reader who has read the most trash novels possible, seeing all the complaints about grammar

The author does not have a sense of good names, is the name of his family and himself just a disgusting author from some Asia? Since this (Master) nobody will use it sounds very creepy

He knows he has pure blood black dont make him a dingus that doesn't get bloodline test

i hope he gets a kneazle as a pet

at last the first chapter with somewhat bearable grammar

I forgot, I read this, and it was decent. But I stopped for some reason and I was really annoyed because mc's parents are basically not part of story. They won't go anywhere with him and author doesn't write about them. Despite mc still being young they basically totally ignore him. I mean parents should be ones to take him for shopping anyways, professors will only do it if they are orphans or you have case like Harry's where they don't let their kids go.

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Maybe he should check tk see if he has any i herited vauLts

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks