UchihaFanatic
Questions: Naruto loves Pranks,,, no doubt!!! so when naruto breed his prank to village and of course make a property loss dunno how many year he do this prank 5 years or more, who's pay the debt? kindness hokage sarutobi jiji? great konoha council? protagonist naruto itself? or accumulation of his family or clan treasury? Conclusion: all of them was EVIL
i think your doing good , not making him to op and not making him lame , we know he is the top dawg of the studenst thats enough right now , we need char progress rather then training progress , if i was in hes spot though i would go to either shika´s parents or choijis parents and tell them that he might got a bloodline or somthing similar its always good to have backing from clans and he seem to be in pretty good standing with shikas and choijis clans , i like the ino twist to make her better shinobi i honestly think they fucked up her char in cannon she could do so much shit with her bloodline yet did nothing and if she actually trained seriously she could easly fight with the best of them , only got good things to say about this novel thus far keep em coming :)
I like the direction but from what iv seen it wouldn't matter if they new he had a blood line he's been an orphan in the village since birth, and his parents where ninja from the village they wouldn't believe he's a spy how could he? he's got an in with two clans and is being taught by a jonin he's pretty solid on the trust department. as far as the ino choice would have personally when with tenten but I'm not the biggest fan of bones so thats biased pluse if your cush working hard was all it took for in to trial she all ready would have all sasuke did was go to school and train so he didn't have to think about the genocide of his people that he's never been seen about