I know your way off from the higher tier transformations but I hope you go the ssj4 route it's just a under used form and having his tail still it makes since to not follow G or v's route.

I get he flipped when he was all but disowned but the pettiness is getting out of hand. he siad some mean stuff not like he shaped ol dude in the face

how old is this kid again? because my 13 year old nephew has a stronger spine then him.

I ment to review way sooner the 104 chapters in but it really is a good read, the world's very flushed out and I like the original planets and characters but I still have no clue what the mc looks like and I'm interested in how it will go or if it will overlap with cannon at any point. as far as quality a little confused in the fights but not to much and im looking forward to more.

I find that can only be stressed so far before jack is giving below average results

I agree with testing everything but I do get sick of jack of all trades types that probably wouldn't actually be that good at any of there thousands of skills

why was the conversation even a secret it dosen't make sense

I swear I read this chapter before and he was a dragon shaped dragon

Allen and gerry seem like bad friends

it's called claws, like the thing he's been killing rats with.

while I absolutely hate the insanely broken shop skill I'm glad its so overwhelming expensive

I mean the kids not wrong, whats he supposed to do hold it till then land gods knows when?

won't him even training derail the plot?

is it like a personality trope for a male character to never had interactions with women to the point of being embarrassed about breastfeeding ?

I always hate this part, the mc could just assume this was supposed to happen and move forward but instead walows in unreasonable self hate and detachment from his new family which helps know one

I mean I'm happy, it makes more since that it actually takes time to get strong,I'd be happy I'd more fics did this its fine to time skip otherwise mc is just this mega op thing in like a day and rules the universe in a years time

a hole god and still want more smh

I respect someone who gets that making a few abilities to their top level is stronger then having a little bit of everything and using half of them lol

if there's one thing I'm wondering why those four, just reading the ability I'd at least put the justice and the dream on the rg

I refuse to think of this as a kind act in any way, this is manipulation and its greats levels and an unforgivable brake in trust, iv grown to like her enough that I want her powers back but never back with people who'd do such a thing.