Awesome! Keep up the great work man, I can’t stop reading!

This is really awesome! It’s definitely one of the better written fictions on this site and I like the concept behind it. If your looking for something fun give it a try! Keep up the great work author!

This is an interesting new take and I’m excited to see where it goes!

Awesome! I hope you are feeling well and taking care of yourself!

Nice job 👍

Good job keep it up!

Yea you jump to much I would have rather you stuck with the tournament. I like the story otherwise.

This is really good! Keep up the great work!

Great job keep it up!

Nice, keep it up!

Umm I already have a mother and I love her very much. But I could use a remodel. Ahhh I’ll just have to have two! Keep up the great work!

Yea practice makes perfect. And if you found a bunch of mistakes by rereads then just do that once or twice be for posting. But in any case keep up the good work and don’t get discouraged!

Ahhh cliff no one likes you!

Ahhhh more!

Man i really like your story’s, but you need to use grammerly or something. A lot of the mistakes would be easy for a word processor to fix right up and take your story to the next level. I will keep reading and enjoying your story and look forward to your improvement.

Keep it up!

Good job keep it up!

Great job!

Awesome keep up the great work!

Thanks and great job. Is he going to be able to upgrade himself?