Just finish Jack ff, on the way to bleach.. Hinestly don't like Jack one because how lackluster mc is with him not utilizing the bead as good as Kai. I got spoiled by how strong Kai is.. Anyway, good job. Hope you keep updating.. 👍👍

Hurm, I saw it now.. Maybe its my lame Internet connection that it only show this Naruto one.. Sorry!

Also if only they know the killian kid also breakthrough...

Nice... Fuck baruch clan.. From this new ace perspective, baruch clan feels like noble. Like real asshole, 'you should be proud to served us as slave' kind of noble... I like these. Let Hogg use and petty excuse to destroy ace live and make him vengeful towards baruch clan and destroy Linley..

That may caused by the mom being alive..

Following the common sense, I bet he already lose the protagonist aura since both his parent is still alive. No motivation from dead parent, no protagonist vengeful zenkai boost.. Also from Linley and his grandpa in the ring interaction, Linley seems like he is going to be whiny little spoiled beat..

Fuse with his spirit swallowing.. Fuse everything!! Also the technique actually emphasis more on making you have max potential so mc will train as fast as rocket..

I like how his system is quite strong since even 30k point can buy a half god king technique which is pretty strong.. Meaning mc can go stronger if he's going for multiverse.. Although I don't like how the cultivation technique has upper limit instead of the type where stronger technique is faster and weaker is slower kind.. Once you reach the peak of the technique, you can't improve anymore. Feel like body refining type tech nique..

Satisfaction of beating other ff author. Also more view and comment, making it more popular.

Tang San is loyal and honest?!! Hah! 😂 😂 😂

So his spirit energy is 3 times denser, stronger and more than other innately full soul rank that already denser and stronger than normal people? Nice.. Also comment section is wild.. That one dude... 😂 😂

I click in your profile and there's no ff of the soul bead and the cube one? You don't post it here?

The betrayal... 😂 😂

Optimize the tendon and marrow pill and be the legendary figure who revamp the formulae...

Dead.

It's mtl if I'm not mistaken...

First true magic should be creation if I'm not mistaken.. So mc should technically able to fix his weak body problem by creating his imagination stuff.. Maybe pill or something..

Focus on the dragon part mate.. 🤣

Well, as much as I want to read further, I can't. The translation is too much for me. Not gonna lie, I have a high tolerance for shitty translation due to me able to even read lnmtl shit.. But this, it really hard. Its not even plain translation of each word. There's a few missing blop here and there. And kind of.. Hurm, anyway, good luck mate. This story is awesome though, symbiote in douluo world is awesome idea.

.... I'm lost.