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Good start only complaint is split long paragraphs [img=recommend]
it seems even the author doesnt know what he was doing. just putting random words to make it catchy but it dont honestly
I don't understand what is going on but it's interesting
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Overall, its interesting. I'm just wondering how the first prologue connects to the rest of the story.
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Not gonna lie, this was a pretty impressive chapter. The story line and.. and the switch between POV's were excellent.
What a nice chapter name lol
