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Sinbau

Sinbau

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2022-12-19 JoinedGlobal
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau5mth
    Replied to Justin_Brooks

    Ngl I’ve thought about this comment for a month now. So when making the newest chp I had your words in mind and try to redirect it as constructive criticism. I am a first time author so I may not be able to convey pacing all that well but rest assured there is a plan lol. And regardless thank you for taking the time to read my work that means a lot, thank you [img=Smitten]

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    I see I will check that out, ty [img=recommend]

    His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    Yeah I agree I think I’m lacking when it comes to world building do you got any novels to recommend for it I wanna fix my newbie writer habits

    His death was something out of a fever dream. Foreign to remember but arguably true in a sense.
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    Haha pretty much it’s Polish for New Life

    Nowe Życie
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    I totally forgot abt that lol the lack of sleep getting to me

    He felt like he was being drowned in a large wave.
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to HouseOfLee
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to AuHNG

    Alright thank you for the review and suggestion [img=recommend]!

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Rosewater15

    I’ll try to fix that but thank you for the review

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to LordShivaStories

    Thank you! [img=strong][img=coins]

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Kristin_Johnson_09

    Coraline Jones Vs. Coraline Hugues haha

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Violet_Ivory

    Whoa long review [img=gift][img=coins] tysm [img=recommend]

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to Kristin_Johnson_09
    With a stone raised, she clenched her jaw and threw the first one at the head of the boy who was holding Coraline's hands tightly together.
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to AuHNG

    It’s the prolgue bc it’s a time farther into the novel but ig I could change it as I continue writing

    Coraline let out a small chuckle while grazing the side of Irene's cheek, playing with her hair in symphony as Irene's warmth tickled at her. Her green eye's longingly stared back at her.
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Replied to AuHNG

    Fixed ty [img=recommend]

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Commented

    Long chp author I say make a pt.2 for it

    Ch 7 MY COUSINS PEER-PRESSURE ME INTO GOING TO SCHOOL
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Commented

    Acá venga!

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    Sinbau8mth
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Commented

    “What do u think of the name Zero Dreams, honey?” …“Great idea!”

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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Commented
    I FIGHT USING A 100-YEAR-OLD DANDELION
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  • Sinbau
    Sinbau8mth
    Commented

    Good start only complaint is split long paragraphs [img=recommend]

    Ch 1 I BECOME THE SECURITY GUARD’S LATE-NIGHT SNACK
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