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OllieZ
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Thanks for writing the fic! Not revealing Rhyhorn's potential is one of the best decisions you made. In my opinion, Potential is the bane of real Pokemon bonding, as I will truly not care about Rhy if he was discovered trash from the start. I will still be disappointed if he really is Trash-tier, but now we would have already bonded with him. Potential makes Pokemon Pay to Win. Thankfully, If I understood right, they can still reach the top with resources, so I hope that it isn't that hard for a Trash Potential to become Medium (Silver) in potential, and that the higher potential are still possible for them, as it really will look like training Trash Potentntial into a waste of time. I still abhor those "realistic" weak-to-strong fics that give the MC trash potential after another, as they never reach that strong part. They drop the fic before it reaches, as they were too busy making the world darker and to make the MC suffer from it. My wish is for this to not turn into that. Anyways, as MC is already deemed special due his dilligence in Psychic training, and looks like he is going to be rewarded by it, I don't think this will be the case. I know you tagged #NoCheats, but Reincarnation and knowing the Pokemon setting is a Cheat on itself, and I hope you can abuse the knowledge all you possibly can.

Pokemon - The Timeless Journey

DemiGod_2972

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Aaron_K_2807
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i love it your doing a great job with this story

DemiGod_2972
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sixpathsofsimp
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use the knowledge , and learn

DemiGod_2972:šŸ‘
Propht
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If Iā€™m reading this correctly, this is a fanfic that keeps the pokemon feel? Like obviously itā€™s probably a bit more mature, but at the very least itā€™s not like the other fics where they confuse pokemon for Dark souls, make them capture more women then pokemon, or make the world more ā€œrealisticā€ completely erasing the charm of pokemon.

Desire96
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is this potential system of yours inspired from Pokemon Alternate Adventures??(I haven't read this book yet)

DemiGod_2972:šŸ‘
DemiGod_2972
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Na, nothing like that. Already said no harem and no lemons.

Propht:If Iā€™m reading this correctly, this is a fanfic that keeps the pokemon feel? Like obviously itā€™s probably a bit more mature, but at the very least itā€™s not like the other fics where they confuse pokemon for Dark souls, make them capture more women then pokemon, or make the world more ā€œrealisticā€ completely erasing the charm of pokemon.
DemiGod_2972
DemiGod_2972AuthorDemiGod_2972

Haven't read that fic. But potential is very common in Pokemon fanfics (though this is mostly inspired from cultivation novels and replaces IV from Pokemon games).

Desire96:is this potential system of yours inspired from Pokemon Alternate Adventures??(I haven't read this book yet)
SugarApostle
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Also another question, is there romance in it? Like ii don't really care about harem, I'm even happy there is no harem, but is there romance? with a single FL?

DemiGod_2972:Na, nothing like that. Already said no harem and no lemons.
DemiGod_2972
DemiGod_2972AuthorDemiGod_2972

Might be. But later on in the story. Kids are just 10 right now in the story while MC mentally is in his 30s.

SugarApostle:Also another question, is there romance in it? Like ii don't really care about harem, I'm even happy there is no harem, but is there romance? with a single FL?
SugarApostle
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Mhm alright, I'll start reading then, while a story in itself is good, i believe romance completes the story and makes it better if done right. The story just feels incomplete without it.

DemiGod_2972:Might be. But later on in the story. Kids are just 10 right now in the story while MC mentally is in his 30s.