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lordlighthh
lordlighthhLv47mthlordlighthh

Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy

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The Primordial Record

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OLB
OLBLv3OLB

I'm on chapter 97 and I'll be honest, I still don't understand anything at all, there are so many things happening at the same time that it's all confusing. not to mention the power system that has not yet been explained correctly. In this story there are more questions than answers.

DaoistEchPYX
DaoistEchPYXLv3DaoistEchPYX

thanks for a proper review. i am always on the lookout for constructive reviews like this instead of mindless 5 star spams. really saves me the trouble of reading through this novel. you have my genuine thanks

Death_012
Death_012Lv3Death_012

Thanks buddy for saving time.