Review Detail of GD_Cruz in Memoir of The Forgotten Hero

I'm still in the early chapters, but I thought the story was catchy enough that I needed to write a review for it as soon as possible. Writing Quality is always subjective, so I base my rating on legibility, pacing, and character over tiny grammar issues most people make in their first drafts. This work passes that easily enough. Story development; as I've said, I'm still in the esrly chapters, but what I've seen so far is gripping to the point of a real page turner. Five stars for now. Character design -- in a word, Tufail is insane, drunk, rowdy as F, and generally the type of protagonist that you want to root for. The side characters feel like they need more work compared to him, but that takes time so I'm looking forward to spending time reading about them some more. Update -- easily 5 stars. World -- the setting's typical fantasy flare, but tropes exist for a reason. I'm in it for the unique magical system -- that really isn't a system -- and the similarities I've noticed with a certain pirtae-themed manga I love. It's original enough that I don't feel like I'm reading a fanfic too. all in all, this is a story that's worth a read, and a collection too!