Review Detail of Whitestair_Ivory in Journey to the One Piece
Review detail
Is this just me or has every reviews under 4 star got deleted. Almost half of these reviews are just spam high stars and there are no review that has any form of criticism or any actual review.
Journey to the One Piece
thelightedghost
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A review which just says the MC is beta for joining the crew and other such bs things will get deleted. If it's genuine criticism like MC is given too much power in the beginning (even though I capped him with just observation Haki ) and other such things will be kept. Sadly all the 1 and 2 star were the same type of criticism. In my last novel too i have didn't delete reviews which genuinely criticised
Don't know what you consider bs but i read till chapter 15, don't really have any sophisticated criticism as most of my displeasure comes from my personal distate of the general path this story is going. Like how he has decided to just ride the canon by almost not existing and letting a literal child get tortured just so he can be sure the plot flows, i just don't really like when MCs take hands off approach by being passive in everything. Oh and him just straight up telling he has a system and what it does but just calling it a fruit power. MCs character was quite.... questionable? Like his background is just a normal working member of a society with a common life yet sometimes he has these outbursts/tantrums of a manchild that didn't get what he wanted (mostly when talking to the system) almost like those Chinese system users. Couldn't really get what he wanted in this life or what ambitions he wanted as in 15 chp I've read he lacked those, not even just have fun as he literally sat on his äss all day at the cabin for years to let plot take it's course. Dialogues between characters were not many but when it happened some of those felt quite off, but that's a given as half of those chp he was a baby and other half was a timeskip and inner monologue. I get that kids in One Piece are generally more mature but did he really have to try hard to seem profound? Like how would a kid who almost never left the cabin know about those words he said at the party night? (I guess you can say his "DF" gave him the experience" Tl;DR Read to only chp 15 not a constructive criticism or review and is just a personal displeasure because canon worship, bipolar mc, passive MC (like willing to detach from everyone/everything for years to plot take the course or letting a child get tortured) and sometimes cringy dialogues.
thelightedghost:A review which just says the MC is beta for joining the crew and other such bs things will get deleted. If it's genuine criticism like MC is given too much power in the beginning (even though I capped him with just observation Haki ) and other such things will be kept. Sadly all the 1 and 2 star were the same type of criticism. In my last novel too i have didn't delete reviews which genuinely criticised
I have gone for the canon because it's my personal choice. I have read many non-canon and they tend to mess up the story for my personal taste. This novel was in my mind for a very long time. About the conversation and tantrums, it does come off soon. Don't know if that helps. Many people will not like my story and that is fine.
Whitestair_Ivory:Don't know what you consider bs but i read till chapter 15, don't really have any sophisticated criticism as most of my displeasure comes from my personal distate of the general path this story is going. Like how he has decided to just ride the canon by almost not existing and letting a literal child get tortured just so he can be sure the plot flows, i just don't really like when MCs take hands off approach by being passive in everything. Oh and him just straight up telling he has a system and what it does but just calling it a fruit power. MCs character was quite.... questionable? Like his background is just a normal working member of a society with a common life yet sometimes he has these outbursts/tantrums of a manchild that didn't get what he wanted (mostly when talking to the system) almost like those Chinese system users. Couldn't really get what he wanted in this life or what ambitions he wanted as in 15 chp I've read he lacked those, not even just have fun as he literally sat on his äss all day at the cabin for years to let plot take it's course. Dialogues between characters were not many but when it happened some of those felt quite off, but that's a given as half of those chp he was a baby and other half was a timeskip and inner monologue. I get that kids in One Piece are generally more mature but did he really have to try hard to seem profound? Like how would a kid who almost never left the cabin know about those words he said at the party night? (I guess you can say his "DF" gave him the experience" Tl;DR Read to only chp 15 not a constructive criticism or review and is just a personal displeasure because canon worship, bipolar mc, passive MC (like willing to detach from everyone/everything for years to plot take the course or letting a child get tortured) and sometimes cringy dialogues.
Yeah i know it's a personal choice and you have your own views on things and likes, fanfics are like fast food where the ingredients might be something others hate while others love, like olives and i just decided to continue eating despite complaining about the hot tomato in it because you said his character improves.
U know when I checked the chapter titles,(Zoro NAMI join) aghhhh man i know I will drop this novel, actually I don't like the way you delete review under 4 rate,what a bad author we have here
thelightedghost:A review which just says the MC is beta for joining the crew and other such bs things will get deleted. If it's genuine criticism like MC is given too much power in the beginning (even though I capped him with just observation Haki ) and other such things will be kept. Sadly all the 1 and 2 star were the same type of criticism. In my last novel too i have didn't delete reviews which genuinely criticised
Says the guy who decides to judge a story from the chapters. Its reviews from you people that I delete. Don't have any knowledge of the story and proceeds to trash it. People in Internet have too much power and no manners
Namelian:U know when I checked the chapter titles,(Zoro NAMI join) aghhhh man i know I will drop this novel, actually I don't like the way you delete review under 4 rate,what a bad author we have hereimage
thelightedghost:Says the guy who decides to judge a story from the chapters. Its reviews from you people that I delete. Don't have any knowledge of the story and proceeds to trash it. People in Internet have too much power and no manners
Good. Then write one. Writing one will give you all the satisfaction and imagination. I wanted a good fan fiction where I wanted MC to follow luffy. Instead of thrashing people on internet saying some author is bad I took matters into my own hands.
Namelian:Bro u know I want mc has his own adventure and story not a fanboy will follow Luffy crew
Lol don't mad dude,ok it's your novel but in the end is a same story line(canon) as anime ,that's why I want different
thelightedghost:Good. Then write one. Writing one will give you all the satisfaction and imagination. I wanted a good fan fiction where I wanted MC to follow luffy. Instead of thrashing people on internet saying some author is bad I took matters into my own hands.
thelightedghost:Good. Then write one. Writing one will give you all the satisfaction and imagination. I wanted a good fan fiction where I wanted MC to follow luffy. Instead of thrashing people on internet saying some author is bad I took matters into my own hands.
Did I say it will same? No. It will change in many things. In fact there will be additional members in the crew. I am mad because people assumed it will be the same story . If it was the same story I wouldn't have ever written it
Namelian:Lol don't mad dude,ok it's your novel but in the end is a same story line(canon) as anime ,that's why I want different
Following everything that is happening in the fanfic it would be strange not to think that the MC will follow the canon as if it were his religion, you know what I mean? It is only your word against what is written (all canon in a forced way in fact) I am not saying that the story is bad or good, it just acts more and less promises, show us that the canon will be different
thelightedghost:Did I say it will same? No. It will change in many things. In fact there will be additional members in the crew. I am mad because people assumed it will be the same story . If it was the same story I wouldn't have ever written it
So when does the plot deviate? I'm generally not fan of One piece fanfics cause they stick to canon like gum to the bottom of a desk. I don't need nor want to read a rehash, and the people above are making it sound like one. Also I liked your bringing game items into the real world fanfic, keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
thelightedghost:Did I say it will same? No. It will change in many things. In fact there will be additional members in the crew. I am mad because people assumed it will be the same story . If it was the same story I wouldn't have ever written it
thelightedghost:A review which just says the MC is beta for joining the crew and other such bs things will get deleted. If it's genuine criticism like MC is given too much power in the beginning (even though I capped him with just observation Haki ) and other such things will be kept. Sadly all the 1 and 2 star were the same type of criticism. In my last novel too i have didn't delete reviews which genuinely criticised
I have deleted 5 star reviews too. There were many spams but of course why will i be called out for that. Lol . Someone in the reviews even said that it was the best fan fic and then gave 3 stars. Of course you won't see that
Embraced:Yet you keep the 5 star reviews with nothing but emojis and spam? Just makes you look dumb.
thelightedghost:I have deleted 5 star reviews too. There were many spams but of course why will i be called out for that. Lol . Someone in the reviews even said that it was the best fan fic and then gave 3 stars. Of course you won't see that
lolipopp69:JUST ONE QUESTION AUTHOR IS MC GONNA HAVE A LOVER????
nah seems like the low tad comments get deleted so sadly no warning of some disappointing points for the story. i mean i would get deleting 1star reviews with random "no harem sect" comment or other such inbred gibberish but if its constructive or has a bit more text to it, it would be nice to see it fur references.
Hello Author, quick question, is MC gonna be making big moves or will he just be doing stuff in the background and we're just watching Luffy and the crew?
thelightedghost:A review which just says the MC is beta for joining the crew and other such bs things will get deleted. If it's genuine criticism like MC is given too much power in the beginning (even though I capped him with just observation Haki ) and other such things will be kept. Sadly all the 1 and 2 star were the same type of criticism. In my last novel too i have didn't delete reviews which genuinely criticised