hope so. kinda makes it drop from a story deserving like 4-4.5/5 points to a story with 1.5/5 as a rating
yep... honestly speaking he would be better of brewing that armortentia love potion and drop a cat hair or something in it and drink it... same obsession but with a less problematic target... or do a ritual and sacrifice his feelings for her... double win and he get cured
will he get cured of the simpsickness? if no could we replace him again? if not a warning would be nice since that would save a lot of time since dropping it would be rational then. especially since you want to make it a chatgroup ff and the simping would ruin it
thats the point of a system honestly... in that case you should have kinda just make a story without one...
the start seems honestly like a punishment. transmigrated in a supernatural world with no real magic in a way? just a bad ripoff/imitation... also the system with the circuits... add to it becoming english nationalitywise... trapped in an NTR world may be merciful in comparison
as good as no cheat since they dont accumolate and are rather cheap and dont really hpld to their own description...
since its passive.... it should always be active
in a way. bit her "real name" never gets mentioned. only that she comes from kovir and her name is Priscilla/Calonetta. vespula is also the name of the washhouse owner in a quest in relation to dandellion
Not very good honestly. a forced chuuni and edgy mc with a lot of unlogical stuff... also i think the other commentor is right. i think i saw that work here more than a year ago under another author... so probably stolen work... even if its bad stealing work from other authors and posting it...
pretty bad especially behaviour from mc so consequently the character development and the story gets bad too.. also slave system which defies its own rules in a negative way.