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Bierbart

Bierbart

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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart3h
    Replied to Takumoto

    hope so. kinda makes it drop from a story deserving like 4-4.5/5 points to a story with 1.5/5 as a rating

    Just because I was nigh unkillable in this world did not mean I could not be hurt. If Lily died from me causing as much chaos as I wanted I would never forgive myself. I would off myself if I was not sure I was able to bring her back to life eventually. That did not mean I wanted to put her in a position that would take her life. She should be the happiest girl in the world. She will be that. I will make sure of that.
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · DaoistH6Yp7V
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart10h
    Commented

    yep... honestly speaking he would be better of brewing that armortentia love potion and drop a cat hair or something in it and drink it... same obsession but with a less problematic target... or do a ritual and sacrifice his feelings for her... double win and he get cured

    Ch 3 Always
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · DaoistH6Yp7V
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart10h
    Commented

    will he get cured of the simpsickness? if no could we replace him again? if not a warning would be nice since that would save a lot of time since dropping it would be rational then. especially since you want to make it a chatgroup ff and the simping would ruin it

    Ch 2 Socks are the best loot
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · DaoistH6Yp7V
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart10h
    Commented

    uff the longwinded apology made me sick... guess it will be a wimpy "good" mc sadly... :/ should have fun getting abused at home then since in that case he wont have the balls and intellect to correct some circumstances :/

    Ch 1 His world stopped spining
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · DaoistH6Yp7V
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart10h
    Commented

    uff gaining the emotions of the predecessor? meh hope that gets better and he gets cured of it... really bad start in that case honestly... tramigrating with a forced simpmode?....

    Ch 1 His world stopped spining
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    Just Another Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · DaoistH6Yp7V
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart21h
    Commented

    hmm the english is a bit of a mess in some cases which makes it hsrd to read. storyline is a bit confusing as well sadly... also it seems the "mc" isnt really the mc sind it revolves more around harry till now than the actual mc sadly...

    Ch 6 Part 5
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    I'm the Guardian
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Replied to DiligentKraken
    As a result, the heir got earrings in the shape of church crosses, two identical bracelets made of unknown material, and two heir rings that were put on the index and ring fingers of the right hand. The pouches portray him tucked away in his pockets.
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    I'm the Guardian
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    meh cucking himself oO especially since he apparently doesnt share memories with his other self and doesnt really influence his behaviour directly...

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    The Ultimate System (Omniversal: DxD, Marvel, Tensura, Fate, HP)
    Anime & Comics · Azeriel
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    uff kinda hope this doesnt devolve into genderbend... :/ why else give such a... ability

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    The Ultimate System (Omniversal: DxD, Marvel, Tensura, Fate, HP)
    Anime & Comics · Azeriel
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    thats the point of a system honestly... in that case you should have kinda just make a story without one...

    This might look to be lucrative but in truth it simply isn't when the cheapest abilities I desire are in the hundreds of thousands. This is not even the worst part, before I can even buy a single ability I first need to buy the system it belongs to. If I want a Zanpakuto I first need to unlock the Shinigami system which would cost me 72 TRILLION points!!! (AN/ I hate when MCs start to collect abilities left and right so I am going to make it really hard for our MC sorry my boy/girl you will see)
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    The Ultimate System (Omniversal: DxD, Marvel, Tensura, Fate, HP)
    Anime & Comics · Azeriel
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    the start seems honestly like a punishment. transmigrated in a supernatural world with no real magic in a way? just a bad ripoff/imitation... also the system with the circuits... add to it becoming english nationalitywise... trapped in an NTR world may be merciful in comparison

    Help to live in this rabbit hole arrived!!!
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    Fate/Ultimate Antagonist
    Anime & Comics · XElenea
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    uff still a scam... :/ thats not a passive skill...

    Ch 21 Chapter 21
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    as good as no cheat since they dont accumolate and are rather cheap and dont really hpld to their own description...

    "The message makes a lot of sense," Aragami Kyomu sighed, placing his hands behind his head and looking up at the clouds in the sky. "It's just a shame that such a good passive skill can only last for a month... And I have no idea what the next month's passive skill will be; it's quite annoying!"
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    since its passive.... it should always be active

    [Skill Description: During skill activation, maximum talent, memory, and learning abilities.]
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    Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    the immunity to negative mental conditions is a hard lie... with all the angst and emoing he does which would mame sasuke more than proud...

    Ch 39 Chapter 39- Invasion of Land of Earth
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    A Flawless Legacy (Waifu Catalog SI)
    Anime & Comics · Fortunate_Soul
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart2d
    Commented

    considering the world from where that healing comes its trash :/ especially since thats normal sayan regen honestly at best

    Ch 34 Chapter 34 - Swapping Attack and Defense?
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    Superman's Saiyan little brother
    Anime & Comics · INIT
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart2d
    Replied to YunCheXaioChe

    in a way. bit her "real name" never gets mentioned. only that she comes from kovir and her name is Priscilla/Calonetta. vespula is also the name of the washhouse owner in a quest in relation to dandellion

    "My stage name is Callonetta. You may call me Priscilla."
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    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
    Video Games · Leohart
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart3d
    Posted

    Not very good honestly. a forced chuuni and edgy mc with a lot of unlogical stuff... also i think the other commentor is right. i think i saw that work here more than a year ago under another author... so probably stolen work... even if its bad stealing work from other authors and posting it...

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    Strongest in DxD
    Anime & Comics · ORIGINofALL
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart5d
    Commented

    hmm pretty wimpy character here.. also a bit dorky if he is pleased with some stuff and his low planning ability after some fuss

    Ch 2 Chapter II: System
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    Naruto: Blood & Pleasure
    Anime & Comics · NexusPrimodius
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart5d
    Posted

    pretty bad especially behaviour from mc so consequently the character development and the story gets bad too.. also slave system which defies its own rules in a negative way.

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    DxD: As a Gamer In Filthy World
    Anime & Comics · Orael
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