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Bierbart

Bierbart

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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart38min
    Commented

    because he dropped his brain and developed a cuckfetish? cause thats the good guys kinda... and 80% japanese mc

    Nevertheless, he had to say that being a good guy was somewhat troublesome, but then why should he become one?
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart42min
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    wrong in a way... they use the claws only to drag down or hold the prey... and cats even hunt mice just for fun and playing with them sadistically... once saw our cat pushing and play catching a mice with spilling guts before letting it bleed out and then ignoring it.... cats *shrug*

    Walking quietly toward those who were in need of help, he suddenly leaped, then struck down his baton mercilessly and took down all of his opponents cleanly, like how a cat used razor-like claws to kill their opponents. 
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart3h
    Commented

    so can he die? since he made the questionable move to not strenghten himself given a chance? natural selection has to work you know...

    Really! Believe him!
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart3h
    Commented

    Too much repetitions really :/ and the goals are quite bad oO

    Observing Kyoko's obscene body for a while, Isao made up his mind to become a good person.
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart4h
    Commented

    the ability description is wrong.... if he can only alter his dna to dna from living things.... the cat and dog dna wouldnt count... they were dead so....

    Ch 5 It's hard to become a good person
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart6h
    Commented

    if she is around ultimate class its even more moronic he didnt copy her power already.... uff

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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart6h
    Commented

    dumb? he should already have the royal physique from lala... oO

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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart7h
    Commented

    uff that makes it all way too messy to be honest :/

    Ch 37 Chapter - 37 : Distrust Part - 4
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    Harry Potter: Hero's adventure
    Book&Literature · Perfect_Lionheart
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart16h
    Commented

    uff so he turned suddenly into a wimpy hypocritical idiot?:/ man... disappointing honestly... from intelligent and cunning to dumb and restricting himself heavily :/ meh... but the reapeating everything nonsensical seems a bit familiar too and welp.. proven correct after looking at the author oO

    Ch 3 Be a good person!
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart16h
    Commented
    Simon Croft (MC)(Blue eyed blonde Guy)
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    Supernatural: This Romantic Crossover Freaks Me Out! (Horror Mashup)
    Movies · Soap_of_Starlight
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart16h
    Commented

    there were some flaws in the work, but honestly it was your best fanfic of all your storys to be honest

    Ch 1 Deleted Fanfic.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
    Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart19h
    Commented

    only 2 forms of haki? and well... the boons are really weak kinda... also the wish thingy is a bit badly used in a way *shrug* if he has time anyway wish for a manual for the ability which is interactive and can rate if the wish gets granted and how he can play around with it *shrug*

    I might be able to scrape by the first half of the Grand Line but without Haki, going into New World would be like a hot woman walking into a men's prison.
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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Stronghold
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart19h
    Commented

    the power/ability list at the end is honestly reaaalllly bad considering a supposed divinity... and being a halfgod.... honestly from that scale it seems more like a minor blessing of the sea... only outlier being the eternal youth and strong body... calling it ommortality there seems like a scam too

    Ch 1 1. New Life
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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Stronghold
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart19h
    Commented

    feels like a ripoff for a divinity orb tbh... since its only half assed in a way feom the description. just saying... we knew what would come out from the synopsis

    "Oh! Not bad! That was a divine template... let's see... Ah, that's the template of a demi god whose divinity is related to the wind and waves. An Polynesian demi-god named Maui. That's really good! It even has potential to reach full godhood after a generating a bit of faith. Congrats!" She started clapping and I felt a little bashful but also happy. I had watched Moana and read a few things about the actual myth. I wonder if this template is the Disney version or the myth version. Guess I'll find out later.
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    OP: Of Wind and Waves
    Anime & Comics · Sir_Stronghold
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart19h
    Commented

    yup you could take both

    If he resurrected from the philosopher's stone, it's best to say that he will have a nonaging body as his new body will be made from alchemy like the homunculus in Full Metal Alchemist. So Hermione and Ginny are also on the table as I can make him single without aging till the fmls becomes adults, like how we don't feel grossed out reading a 115 y/o vampire with a 21 y/o girl.
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    I became Voldemort
    Book&Literature · HornyFBI
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart21h
    Replied to kingthegodofnight

    Honestly speaking? way too much fics with dumb and good mcs... single female lead are mostly bad too since it ends in massive and braindead simping... not that i am a fan of this fic honestly... harem is done badly and it needs some correction since its a patchup kinda... way better than the previous version of this fic though... still kinda meh....

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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Replied to Bierbart

    and even then if he clears it... it wastes a lot of energy

    Ch 680 CH60 (674), First Gym Battle (7)
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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    think there is a big flaw in that fight with lucario and the time its going on especially with the hiding behind stones... weather move should still be ongoing... and it hurts lucario badly... if he dowsnt clear some room it should constantly refill and do damage .. so after a few minutes hiding it should be down pretty badly to be honest

    Ch 680 CH60 (674), First Gym Battle (7)
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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    so he would accept getting cucked then?oO since his usal form is male? meh... dude...

    Ch 80 Chapter 30 Part 2
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    I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
    Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
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  • Bierbart
    Bierbart1d
    Commented

    effect of the attribute points seems somewhat low...

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Who Says Ninjato are Useless?
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    Naruto: Hidden Mist's Great Blacksmith
    Anime & Comics · lookar
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