Thanks for the chapter brother

The original starts well but halfway through it becomes garbage, you can start reading it and abandon the novel when you feel like you can't stand reading anymore, I did that.

Here bro, you need it

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I really hope with all my desire that you know how to carry this story forward, the original was a waste of material, Its author started the story well but halfway through he returned to yet another ordinary novel, you have all my support to continue this fanfic 💪💪

Finally someone does something with this world, I hated and loved the original, the MC irritated me a lot and I abandoned reading it after the MC starts fighting, from that moment on the novel became un thash, I hope you make a long fanfic with a better MC and a better plot, I would hate for a fanfic about this world to be wasted

It's better if you don't know, it's a cancer of the platform

Clearly not

I already made it clear, in addition to not liking the plot, the story is poorly presented, the scenes are strange as they do not give the full context of the situation and what is happening around the scene (I'm not talking about a particular scene, I'm talking about almost everything I read up to the chapter I took a screenshot of), It is as if you had a book where you write down all the ideas that occur to you and then present them one after the other without stopping to slowly and clearly explain the situation, everything is very spontaneous, you should give more time to the plot and not rush the story, the reader needs to breathe and not receive so much stimulation because you only make the reader feel rejection, at least that's how it is in my reading experience, not slow, at a normal rhythm, slow when it has to be slow and fast when it has to be fast.

You can read at your own risk, the author decided to clarify the plot of the fanfic in the middle and not at the beginning so here I leave you what you will find in this fanfic, It's definitely not my cup of tea nor will it ever be, I hate when there are stories where the author seal the memories of the MC, I think it is a basic and lazy resource on the part of the author. Additionally, the story has horrible grammar and story structure, this story urgently needs a rewrite and reorganization of the events and how they are presented, it's disastrous.

This should be in the first chapter to make things clear, I wouldn't have wasted my time reading something I know I don't like.

Thanks for letting me know, without your help I would never have known that Hela was Odin's daughter in the MCU, uff thanks

It's creative Minecraft, it also has a nice MC and nothing too emo or very shy, a normal person, I love it .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I hope you to continue this

I love this way of using creativity mode

the image does not exist brou

This is what I imagine a Minecraft story should be like, no explanations and overreactions followed by awkward moments where the protagonist doesn't know what to say (ahem, I'm not talking about other stories I read recently...) finally an MC that goes straight to what's important without taking unnecessary detours and turns

Who wants an FL? We want fun, don't be childish 🫵

The dialogue of the characters and the MC is too exaggerated, theatrical, it is like a script and not like a real conversation. I already said it before, but I would have liked it to be normal Minecraft, now there is a Nether tribe... I don't like it