I am now re-writing Hadrian Black, to the quality I believe you should have received from the beginning. It was one of the first things I wrote, as such - there were many issues (some disregarded by readers, and others impossible to). This story will be similar, but the writing standard, motives - and the way certain events occur, will be different. I believe you will notice this from the beginning. Also! This story will be much, much longer than the previous one. This because I will be posting it on ff.net and AO3 at the same time, so be prepared for that. Anyways, enjoy - and thank you for reading.
MIKK
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LIKEHarry is Hadrian's pet name, hence why only James and Lily call him it. After a couple of chapters, it should have been easy to discern this. Arthur is his twin brother.
Empyrium:Why do you have 3 Names there? Harry/Arthur and Hadrian, choose 2 for 2 children, not 3!
That is so confusing, but I may be wrong, but didnt you mentioned Harry too when he was with his grand parents,
MIKK:Harry is Hadrian's pet name, hence why only James and Lily call him it. After a couple of chapters, it should have been easy to discern this. Arthur is his twin brother.
Empyrium:That is so confusing, but I may be wrong, but didnt you mentioned Harry too when he was with his grand parents,