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feel like we are skipping 100ch worth of content
First: If you do gender bender, please put it in the tags or write it somewhere. Second: I feel like you are trying to be funny at some points, which just doesnt feel natural at all. Third: You should proofread/edit your chapters, a lot of small, most of the time silly mistakes. 4: The idea is interesting, but for me it feels slightly better then just the other stories. Nothing really new. I dont know if it is because you just had to do gender bending and the mc is weird( my opinion) but it destroyed the novel for me. Will never understand how people like gender bending. What is weird too is, how mc went from boy to girl, and the only thing he noticed were his smaller body and big boobs. No other reaction at all. Feels forced and not natural. But wish you good luck with your novel
why do you always write disassemble big?
Okay, this is braindead stupid, just feels like you want to be funny in a forcefull name.
time, one
Seems like this story has no future if he can just absorb talents. Lets see gow author does it
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