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Empyrium

Empyrium

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2020-12-29 JoinedGermany
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium2d
    Replied to derreksm

    Yeah, if he stays that stupid I will drop this. Mean, this isnt smth you need to be smart for, its more common sense...

    Ch 16 Revenge is pleasurable.
    Demonic Dragon: Harem System
    Fantasy · Katanexy
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium2d
    Commented

    Weird...

    'Damn it! Damn it! Damn it! Come to me, System! Give me the System! Now, Truck-Kun, I know you're listening! Hahaha!'
    Demonic Dragon: Harem System
    Fantasy · Katanexy
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium2d
    Replied to Shadowwarrior_007

    I am watching you

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Unveiling Potential
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium3d
    Commented

    You have mistakes in your prev chapters, but this one is by far the worst

    Ch 55 Chapter 55: Understanding Spells
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium3d
    Commented

    Would be nice if ablilites etc would get smth like [••••] or so

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: New status Panel
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium3d
    Commented

    Cant really kill mcs mother twice, CAN YOU?????

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Unveiling Potential
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium3d
    Commented

    Romance?

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: A New Path Unfolds
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium3d
    Replied to Shadowwarrior_007

    so, there really was no point for all that and you could have just said. Sad life, cruel ending, reborn as a wolf? Hope he meets his mother again

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Desperation and Fear
    True Beast: I Am Reincarnated As A White Wolf With A System
    Fantasy · Shadowwarrior_007
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium4d
    Commented

    Got some grammar mistakes

    Ch 1 CHAPTER 1 – A New Life.
    Primordial Soul's Rebirth
    Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Replied to ItsNEVERduck

    Yeah it feels like author knows that stuff in bis head, just forgets to add it to the novel. Crazy. This story feels so empty.

    Bitten By Vampire Princess, I Was Forced To Transform.
    Fantasy · FackU4Ever
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Replied to ShiroNeko280

    feel like we are skipping 100ch worth of content

    As Adrian's abilities grew, so did his reputation within the supernatural community. He was no longer just an ordinary vampire; he was a rising star, a force to be reckoned with. The other vampires began to take notice, and even the members of the Crimson Council acknowledged his potential.
    Bitten By Vampire Princess, I Was Forced To Transform.
    Fantasy · FackU4Ever
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Replied to FackU4Ever

    You got a mistake in your sypnosis

    Bitten By Vampire Princess, I Was Forced To Transform.
    Fantasy · FackU4Ever
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Replied to George_Nader_3914

    yeah have the same problems too, dont understand these people who give 5 stars. Probably people who read mtl novels. Pretty sad, had high hopes at the beginning

    Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch
    Fantasy · PikaQ
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Posted

    First: If you do gender bender, please put it in the tags or write it somewhere. Second: I feel like you are trying to be funny at some points, which just doesnt feel natural at all. Third: You should proofread/edit your chapters, a lot of small, most of the time silly mistakes. 4: The idea is interesting, but for me it feels slightly better then just the other stories. Nothing really new. I dont know if it is because you just had to do gender bending and the mc is weird( my opinion) but it destroyed the novel for me. Will never understand how people like gender bending. What is weird too is, how mc went from boy to girl, and the only thing he noticed were his smaller body and big boobs. No other reaction at all. Feels forced and not natural. But wish you good luck with your novel

    Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch
    Fantasy · PikaQ
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Commented

    why do you always write disassemble big?

    The boar carcass vanished in a flash, and the Warehouse got stocked with all the goodies from the Disassemble. 
    Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch
    Fantasy · PikaQ
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Commented

    Okay, this is braindead stupid, just feels like you want to be funny in a forcefull name.

    Ditching the generic castle names, Alex punched in a new, catchier name for herself: Hamburger.
    Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch
    Fantasy · PikaQ
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium6d
    Commented

    I will give it a try, even if it has disgusting gender bender. Hope mc will behave good and not weird. But why gender bender😭

    Ch 1 Well, being a girl isn't too bad
    Building the Strongest Undead Empire from Scratch
    Fantasy · PikaQ
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium13d
    Commented

    time, one

    After what felt like a long time,One of them took a step back.
    Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son
    Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium18d
    Commented

    Seems like this story has no future if he can just absorb talents. Lets see gow author does it

    [Absorbed talent [Flame(D-)]
    Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!
    Fantasy · TheUngod
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  • Empyrium
    Empyrium19d
    Commented

    gave*

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    Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!
    Fantasy · TheUngod
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