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I like the story so far, I generally hate harem stuff, but so far it had not bugged me. I love op mc stuff, would love to see him create some spells, but I'm sure that happens later on. keep up the good work, better then a lot of stories by new writers I have read.
I'd remove that connection as well, like they can still get close as a family, no need for some magic forcing the subject.