Review Detail of Poet_Legion in Inverse System
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this book has good promise however the author clearly doesn't know how to implement a story without forcing it. The author also claims that the main characters a 10-year old kid yet he does things that no ten-year-old would ever know how to do especially if all they do is be left home and clean all day and babysit so the main character doesn't make sense and with his sister and overall the entire story feels very forced the fights boring and sure the author has like a direction he's going with the story but it doesn't matter if you can't get past the first 30 chapters without wanting to vomit because you can't understand what's going on in the story by there because of poor writing or because the story is so far so you can't get entertained with it.
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Just out of curiousity, what chapter did you read up to? Because id say onlt the first 13 or so chapters are like that. A lot of writing issues are fixed afterwards and story progression as well. Also, when i say that The mc is 10 years old, i dont mean his physical abilities. he can topple a tree with a single swing, so thay wouldnt make any sense. I’m talking about his mental state, he clearly wouldnt have the same kind of life experience that a teen or an adult would have, making him perhaps make the wrong choices in certain scenarios. I understand that that puts a lot of readers off, which is something ive learned from for future novels That i may start.