Review Detail of PsyLoRD in Transmigrated as an NTR’ed protagonist.

SailusGebel:Thanks for rating my writing so high, I thought It was much worse than four out of five. About the release rate, I would be glad to release more chapters, but I can't. I have my job which takes most of my time, I don't live in a country that helped their citizens in the times of pandemic. So I must work hard. As for the story and everything else. You are free to dislike it, to each their own. I do appreciate that you spend your time on this and even wrote a review, thanks for giving it a try.

SailusGebel:Thanks for rating my writing so high, I thought It was much worse than four out of five. About the release rate, I would be glad to release more chapters, but I can't. I have my job which takes most of my time, I don't live in a country that helped their citizens in the times of pandemic. So I must work hard. As for the story and everything else. You are free to dislike it, to each their own. I do appreciate that you spend your time on this and even wrote a review, thanks for giving it a try.

PsyLoRD:My only real problem is the MC. You could just have made him a normal person and not that ****

SailusGebel:The whole point of this novel is the MC. If I made him a 'normal' person than this novel would become a generic story real soon. I wanted to give real character development and a different personality. So far the mc's I've read about are either thinking with their lower half, of they are extremely brutal and cunning and don't care about anything. And a little number of protagonists who are super chill. I wanted to give my protagonist many flaws, that he would correct, then he would gain other imperfections instead of his old ones. I've read too many comments on other stories where people would ask for character development, for a different kind of mc. That they are tired of the same thing, and I was like them. That's why I decided to write this novel. And judging by the comments on other sites I indeed managed to do it for someone. To give them something fresh and new. It's just this story, is not your cup of tea, it's okay.

Overwrit:Shit, I trust the opinion of Aizen 2.0, now I am in doubt whether to read or not.

SailusGebel:The whole point of this novel is the MC. If I made him a 'normal' person than this novel would become a generic story real soon. I wanted to give real character development and a different personality. So far the mc's I've read about are either thinking with their lower half, of they are extremely brutal and cunning and don't care about anything. And a little number of protagonists who are super chill. I wanted to give my protagonist many flaws, that he would correct, then he would gain other imperfections instead of his old ones. I've read too many comments on other stories where people would ask for character development, for a different kind of mc. That they are tired of the same thing, and I was like them. That's why I decided to write this novel. And judging by the comments on other sites I indeed managed to do it for someone. To give them something fresh and new. It's just this story, is not your cup of tea, it's okay.

Inferno_Vor:Generic =\= Bad There are people that just like certain genres. If you go really broad defining generic writing an existing genre(romance, adventure, action) is generic because they are already pretty populated.

SailusGebel:I've never said that a generic story is a bad story though? The point of my message was, that I want to write something different.

Inferno_Vor:What you wrote could still be counted tho, you just didn't run into it. I mean I've read a decent amount of such stories(I usually drop them, personally at least, since I don't like that sort of mc) where mc was usless or flawed in the beginning but becomes decent or great later

SailusGebel:That is true as well, I don't know much about that kind of novels, but the r-18 manhwas are mostly like that. When it comes to novels, personally, I've only seen two novels where the mc was like mine out of approximately fifty novels. Also, it's a work in progress, it's not finished even in my drafts, so I myself can't judge if the novel would turn out generic.

Inferno_Vor:I know, I'm just saying cuz I get salty at such mcs so don't mind me too much. I started not liking thesw genres when I ran into mcs that didn't fix with growth so I just evade such books personally even if there is growth since I don't know when and will I get through the early chapters xD

SailusGebel:The whole point of this novel is the MC. If I made him a 'normal' person than this novel would become a generic story real soon. I wanted to give real character development and a different personality. So far the mc's I've read about are either thinking with their lower half, of they are extremely brutal and cunning and don't care about anything. And a little number of protagonists who are super chill. I wanted to give my protagonist many flaws, that he would correct, then he would gain other imperfections instead of his old ones. I've read too many comments on other stories where people would ask for character development, for a different kind of mc. That they are tired of the same thing, and I was like them. That's why I decided to write this novel. And judging by the comments on other sites I indeed managed to do it for someone. To give them something fresh and new. It's just this story, is not your cup of tea, it's okay.

DaoBestower_:So, the Mc will eventually be alpha chad?