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Review Detail of YourMaster in Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

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YourMaster
YourMasterLv32yrYourMaster

I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.

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Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse

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Releaxy
ReleaxyLv1Releaxy

Literally

Sesoni
SesoniLv15Sesoni

Yeah it blows my mind that stuff like this is topping the charts, but gems like Psychic Parasite get nothing because it requires more than a 3rd grade reading level to follow.

Zeeshan_Haider_8466
Zeeshan_Haider_8466Lv1Zeeshan_Haider_8466

I find it insulting that u compare the author to a 12 year old. Why u may ask? Bcz I'm 13 yrs old and trust me, I would do a way better job. The author is more like a 10 yr old.

Abdilatif_Said
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Zeeshan_Haider_8466:I find it insulting that u compare the author to a 12 year old. Why u may ask? Bcz I'm 13 yrs old and trust me, I would do a way better job. The author is more like a 10 yr old.
Boundless_Daoist
Boundless_DaoistLv3Boundless_Daoist

How far did you read?