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YourMaster

YourMaster

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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster1yr
    Replied to Devilkr_17

    What about "no harem" and 500+ confessions makes you think that the MC can be anything but a complete SIMP? xD

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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Replied to Atrius_Beng

    No. 2+2=0 There are different numeral systems.

    Of course, nothing in this world was 100% absolute.
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    Solo Leveling(Only I Level Up)
    Urban · 추공 (Chugong)
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Posted

    I don't really hate this story, but let's be honest. The writing is at the level of a 12-year-old kid who decided to write a story of his own. In fact, I bet that many 12-year-olds would do a better job. The beginning and the premise are completely copied from a Korean novel with a similar name. The main character is one-dimensional while the side characters are ZERO-dimensional. This story and system are so simple that even someone with a 70 IQ would understand it easily. There are plot holes starting from the first chapter. There the MC said something like "I hope that I'll awaken a useful ability"... But in fact, in this world, there are no abilities to awaken, lol. If you aren't facepalming at most of his decisions then let me congratulate you - you've passed this IQ test with 80 points! Yay! So why is this popular? I think that this story, Vampire System, and Cultivation Online show you what you need to succeed at Webnovel. Op protagonist, a fast pace so that he could show off how OP he is, fast release rate so that people could get addicted to your story. That's it. Other people waste their words by trying to write a story that makes sense, the only one who managed to get to the top with such an approach is the author of Supreme Magus.

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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Replied to UnderRated_Reader1

    Because if a story is a trash in the first 30 chapters then why you should endure it until it gets better?

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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Replied to Nightamer

    IDK, man... Suicide can be only a choice if you, for example, terminally ill and suffer every day because of extreme pain. Mental suffering can always be overcome, just because your gf died doesn't mean that you can't move on and continue with your life. In many stories, it even serves as a starting point for the MC to start his journey.

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    Samsara Online
    Games · XIETIAN
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Commented

    Lol, three grands a month xDD

    "I'm the owner of this house, and I've been thinking about renting out the third floor for a while now. You look like a sincere and trustworthy one, so if you're looking for a place to stay, I can rent it to you for three thousand dollars a month. It may seem a bit expensive, but you won't find another place in this area with this kind of price. It has a balcony, two bedrooms, one living room that's also a kitchen, and one bathroom." The old man said to him.
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    Inferior Cultivation System
    Urban · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster2yr
    Replied to Leicchi

    "THE GIRLS HAVE THEIR OWN THOUGHTS AND THEY AREN'T BLINDLY FELL IN LOVE WITH THE MC." Lol, are you sure that you've read the same novel I did? Pretty much all women fall in love with the MC without any development. Or, rather, they fall in love with his dick.

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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to Cloudelka

    Lol, he's already started to CULTIVATE in the real world and it's only a matter of time before he cures his illness. But it wouldn't be soon, it would make things too boring otherwise. Knowing this author, the MC would get healed after 400 chapters or so.

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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Posted

    So far it's much better than Dual Cultivation, unless you are here for *** scenes. Harem is good, but if I wanted to read about ***, I would just check some hentai. In terms of how interesting it is, this story is one of the best on webnovel and ratings prove it. Unlike DuCu, this story follows a weak to strong plot and while the MC is OP, his power feels fair, and, so far, cultivations levels are consistent. The best thing this author does it making us anticipate how the MC would show off his talent while being partially ignorant about it and not understanding what's the big deal. The MC is a nice little fellow and though his personality is kind of bland, he isn't annoying. There's no deep world-building, complex plot or well-developed characters, but you are here not for that anyway, right? It's one of the greatest wish-fulfilling stories with OP MC and the fact that it's the number one sponsored story on the whole site proves it. It kind of reminds me of the story named Number One Under Heaven. There, the MC is even more OP and almost as much innocent, but the problem with that story was that he was already the strongest in the world, literally. Plus, his character was kind of inconsistent. To the first-time readers, I would advise waiting for a few months before there would be more chapters, otherwise, you'll need to hungrily wait like everyone else.

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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to CockroaChan

    The key word here - listened.

    He was born with an incurable illness that left him blind at the age of 7 and crippled at the age of 13. He is now 18 years old, and for the past 5 years he would lay in his bed, unable to do anything else besides just laying there; it was a gruesome and unimaginable life that one wouldn't even dare to imagine themselves in.
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to Sarvador7

    Хз, эти самые 500-800 это однообразная скука. ГГ практически не растет в силе и сражается с монстрами одного уровня снова и снова, при этом частенько получает оплеух от тех кто так-то не должен быть сильнее него. Я дропнул когда его почти убил какой-то хиленький ассасин - это было сразу после того как ГГ "помог" бессмертному личу. Автор просто решил тянуть резину вместо того чтобы двигать сюжет.

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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to YourMaster

    Also, after middle comes late and only then peak.

    There are 3 sub-stages in every rank ---> For example: Early rank 5, than middle rank 5 and then peak rank 5
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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to ElhitBunny

    I personally know a guy who already had *** at 12 and at 13-14 about 10-15% of teens aren't virgins. By my estimation, about 1/3 of teens have *** before they turn 16, so this is rather prudish for a dual cultivation sect, lol.

    "Although I have been accepted into the sect, I am not allowed to participate in dual cultivation until I become an adult at the age of 16." Qi Yue explained in a bashful tone after seeing the disappointment on Su Yang's face.
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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Commented

    They conveniently ignore a monstrous little girl near him, lol .

    She nodded and said, "His life is not in danger, but he won't be able to fight the Mountain Lord anymore, and you are the only one here that's strong enough to fight it. Please, help us defeat the Mountain Lord! I will do anything to repay you afterward!"
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to _mori

    This is how you become a peak expert in a cultivation world!

    While her presence piqued his interest, he did not want to involve himself with another expert at his level without any good reason, as that might lead to unnecessary confrontation.
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to YourMaster

    Plus, 20 km per hour isn't slow at all.

    After half an hour of running, Yuan and Xiao Hua could finally see the city walls.
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Replied to TheNomadx

    He probably just enjoyed the feeling and the view.

    After half an hour of running, Yuan and Xiao Hua could finally see the city walls.
    altalt
    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Commented

    Are they stupid? The divine-ranked servant is enough to kill ALL players, including them, all at once. It would take them years to get even close to hurting her.

    Ch 8 An Overwhelming Advantage
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Commented

    If he started to tell her stories from One Piece it should take him a couple of weeks. xD

    Yuan began telling her famous and classical fairy tales from Earth that he's heard when he was young such as a certain individual poisoning a girl who awakened due to a kiss from a prince, mermaids in the ocean, and pirates fighting in the sea.
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • YourMaster
    YourMaster3yr
    Commented

    Think about it guys - if he revealed it, everyone would just try to either get them on their side or kill him, or maybe there's a way to steal a physique.

    <Rank: Celestial>
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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