SanjarAli
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I am demented
2024-03-23 JoinedAscension Island
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SanjarAli1hReplied to novelmeisterCh 78 Second Phase [4]- SanjarAli6hReplied to novelmeisterCh 78 Second Phase [4]
- SanjarAli2dReplied to novelmeisterCh 75 Second Phase [1]
- SanjarAli3dCommented
Vampire traits...
Character traits: Deceptive, Emotionless, Observant, Highly Intelligent, Nyctophile, Heliophobia. - SanjarAli3dPosted
A novel with great potential, minimal grammatical mistakes, writing needs work, paragraphs need to be a bit shorter (1 and utmost 3 sentences often), the pace is too slow I think, 1 fight with a few bandits shouldn't take 5 chapters in my opinion, and it could have been done in chapter and utmost 3.
- SanjarAli4dCommentedOhh god lord, what had happened in the moment he fell unconscious.
- SanjarAli4dCommentedCh 6 System
- SanjarAli5dCommented
I love hand signs rizzing! [img=Speechless]
"So-so? Really, Miss Melody?" Jykrain's brows twitched as he clutched his chest dramatically. "Even though I worked hard for four years just to speak with you, ugh!" - SanjarAli5dReplied to Gryphinne
Thanks... you too. 🖤
Have you ever imagined dying at the peak of your success, yet not having the chance to enjoy it? - SanjarAli6dReplied to novelmeisterCh 69 First Large-Scale Operation [3]
- SanjarAli6dReplied to novelmeisterCh 69 First Large-Scale Operation [3]
- SanjarAli6dCommented
I imagine it every day...
Have you ever imagined dying at the peak of your success, yet not having the chance to enjoy it? - SanjarAli7dCommented
Why no punishment? While I'm fine with the current state, adding consequences, as seen in many novels, could enhance the story.
[Level Daily Reward And Perk: Daily reward of $10, $10 for every mission completed when host is still in said level] - SanjarAli7dCommented
🎈🖤
These made him to completely lose his trust in people, and hate them but he hates himself more. - SanjarAli7dCommented
Not effort. You have to have advantage or in other words 'System'.
But if Claire wanted to improve and climb the ranks, then she had to to put in the same kind of effort as the current top student. - SanjarAli7dCommented
That's the way of authors, can't be helped... (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ🆘
A supporting character destined to die for the character development of the main target of the female player character. - SanjarAli7dCommented
sounds like a game of 'Magical Girls'.
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