Review Detail of SanjarAli in Magic? Swords? Nah, I have Guns

A novel with great potential, minimal grammatical mistakes, writing needs work, paragraphs need to be a bit shorter (1 and utmost 3 sentences often), the pace is too slow I think, 1 fight with a few bandits shouldn't take 5 chapters in my opinion, and it could have been done in chapter and utmost 3.