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ladymanah

ladymanah

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Nurse IRL, so expect dumb medical stuff sprinkled in. I have worked in the same nursing home for 8 years.

2024-02-16 JoinedUnited States
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Bastard Spent The Night
    When The Gangster Falls In Love
    LGBT+ · Riceballs_25
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 READ THE WARNING
    [BL] EGOTISTIC
    LGBT+ · chacantsleep
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Replied to tangerine_boy

    Oh yeah. She's supoosd to be the one really annoying CNA that's loud and obnoxious. Every nursing home will have one.

    Ch 4 Shut up, Nancy
    Working in a Nursing Home with a Hot Male Coworker (BL)
    LGBT+ · ladymanah
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Posted

    I am giving you a 5 because it is well written and interesting! The only thing I would suggest is possibly push the world building out a few chapters because the first 3 chapters are slow and you want to ideally capture your reader's attention front the start. I would find a way to weave this stuff into the events of the story as trickles of info.

    Ancestral Throne : Building The Strongest Empire In Another World
    Fantasy · Mysterious_Ghost
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Commented

    Hello! The plot is interesting! I would suggest running your chapters through a grammar checker named Quillbot. it's free and will make suggestions to polish up the text. I found it has helped me a ton!

    Ch 9 chapter9:-THE DAWN
    RECORDS OF A KING
    Fantasy · Novelarpan
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Commented

    it's good! written well! I only suggest not using things like *sigh* for actions since that is more of a role play thing.

    Ch 1 The king's letter.
    NedGarrick (BL+Mpreg)
    LGBT+ · QW_JiHi
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah8d
    Commented

    it's very well written Kwwp going~ I love the title. [img=Loving it]

    Ch 1 A Silent Meeting
    PUNARNAVA
    Fantasy · Infinitus_Deos
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Sober
    Stranded: A Lovestruck Merman's Tale (BL)
    LGBT+ · panpanwuv
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Chapter 1:The Mask of Mourning
    An Unspoken Bond:The Prince and His Scholar(BL)
    LGBT+ · xiaohuli455
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    It sounds like me. It takes me all day to wake up, lol.

    She is definitely not a morning person, "Ma'am, it's already morning…Please get up…"
    KEIR (YOUR'S)
    LGBT+ · zoya_raichand
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    It's good~ The writing is great. itbmakes me want to write a GL someday!

    Ch 1 CHAPTER 1- THE WORK ALCOHOLIC
    KEIR (YOUR'S)
    LGBT+ · zoya_raichand
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    I like that it is an old man character~

    Ch 1 CHAPTER 1
    X-season 1
    Fantasy · A_N_O_N_Y_M
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    The Hero Loves Me After Reincarnation (BL)
    LGBT+ · SOS_2506
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 12 I don’t know if I want this man
    Welcome intruder
    LGBT+ · Nilson Rutizat
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah9d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 8 Star gazing (1)
    Romeo & Romeo (BL)
    LGBT+ · xaechris08
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah10d
    Commented

    Hello~! Your writing is very good and the story is interesting. I hope you keep going! I always love BL best. I do suggest putting your chapters through a free grammar checker, though. there are so obvious errors and ways you could improve the text. I suggest quillbot through the browser. The app isn't as good I found. it provides very good suggestions. With my first novel, there were a lot of mistakes and people lowered the reviews because of it. People can be very picky. it was a lot of stupid typo errors because I write on my phone lol. Anyway, it improved my text tenfold. So, it may help you. too, as a new writer. I am hoping for your success! I will follow!

    Ch 1 1. Unlearning and Relearning
    The Reprobate Kpop Idol Trainee (Sexting Gone Wrong)
    LGBT+ · Abbiex
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah10d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 THE SCENT OF AMBROSIA
    BLOODROSE: THE VAMPIRE LORDS' MATE
    LGBT+ · Anna_Baibe
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah10d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 DIE IN PEACE
    Misery Craves Company (BL)
    LGBT+ · Eat_Who_Mel
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah10d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Begining
    Forge of Shadows
    Fantasy · Winter_Iris
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  • ladymanah
    ladymanah10d
    Commented

    This is great~ Keep writing! I think you would get contracted if you applied.

    Ch 1 Chapter 01: "A Wish"
    My Love Rival Likes Me?!
    LGBT+ · GreenAlienBlueDuck
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