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I understand that you want to make money, you are publishing empty chapters as advertising work, which makes sense and the beginning of the book is good, but I did not read the rest.

Very good story and thank you for wrote this story

What is the need for impol down floor information? Etc... Book good but There is Not enough chapter, Book good but There is Not enough chapter

Perfect, I liked fist episode

You got bored because you went into too much detail, it would have remained a bit superficial but you would have finished the story but you couldn't do that, this is normal because writing is difficult. He fought the Yakuza too much, it was boring. Shin don't enough grown of age - point , and Let's say other things aren't too much of a problem.

Wow amazing

Your one piece fanfiction good. Writing a book is difficult, I also have a book called One Piece: Master... Good luck

Yes I know..😈

5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star 5 star The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing The story is flowing

The novel is going very well. I like it

Thanks

Why 5 elders don't come?

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Yes, we understood from the end of the book that the main character is a Psychopath. The ending did not satisfy me, it progressed well at first but then the story slowed down...

I realized this isn't your story, you're a translator or whatever.

You should expand your pirate crew and It's seriously a good story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty. Ctrl+c / ctrl+v It's seriously a nice story, those who comment negatively are the ones who don't know how to appreciate beauty.

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I love this story