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Smile_Jorjie

Lv11

There's not a writer out there who's sane, no, not one.

2023-09-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Replied to sebastian_WN

    sure I'm Hoshi Ebby

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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Commented

    This is too much

    Ch 46 "Make me yours, master." [R-18]
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    Captured By My Yandere Alien Girlfriends
    Sci-fi · sam_marfe
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Posted

    Author like my comment please... I'm a huge fan

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    Re: Apocalypse Game
    Games · Avan
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Commented

    epic

    CTA mental health hospital
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    IGNOTO
    Urban · _hestia_
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 I GOT KILLED BY MY OWN FATHER!
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    Supreme Transmigrator-Axton Zavier
    Fantasy · LIGht_Pen
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie6mth
    Commented

    Ewwwwwwww... Kimochiwaru 🤢

    "Just suck on it like you would do on a popsicle." Lirien instructed Kaida.
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    Captured By My Yandere Alien Girlfriends
    Sci-fi · sam_marfe
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    My housemate just said this🤭

    This just doesn't make sense. 
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    Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    Roar... give it to me. Give It To Me! 😖

    It's the apocalypse.
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    Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    I AM IN LOVE?!🤭❤️

    Ch 2 Cracks
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    Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    I would spit on him lol 😂

    But all I said was, may his soul rest in peace and may the Lord forgive him.
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    DANIELLE
    Teen · qweenamanda
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Posted

    A must read people. A MUST READ!!! Don't sleep on this 😭❤️

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    Divine Path System
    Fantasy · _Transcendent
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Replied to Shirael

    Anything goes when you're royalty 😁

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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Replied to Shirael

    It's based on a real life event🤭

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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Posted

    Hey. Nice description but your paragraphs are too bulky. Please do something about that. And also, your dialogues are too few and the chapters are too short. This is a potential filled work and I promise to see it through. Please do something about it.

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    Pirates vs Knights: The Hidden Heir
    Fantasy · BensonMusonda19
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    Where are the monologues and dialogues?😭

    Ch 2 The Maid's Child
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    Pirates vs Knights: The Hidden Heir
    Fantasy · BensonMusonda19
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    The paragraphs are too long please. I had problems reading them but nice intro. Good job 👍

    Ch 15 Introduction
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    Pirates vs Knights: The Hidden Heir
    Fantasy · BensonMusonda19
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    So many typographical errors. My eyes are hurting while reading 😑

    Ch 2 Sam's reality romance
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    Secrets and untold past
    Urban · dgirlblusky
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie7mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 The 'Villainess System' to the rescue!
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • Smile_Jorjie
    Smile_Jorjie8mth
    Commented

    I'm in love 😗

    Ch 1 The 'Villainess System' to the rescue!
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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