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Hey. Nice description but your paragraphs are too bulky. Please do something about that. And also, your dialogues are too few and the chapters are too short. This is a potential filled work and I promise to see it through. Please do something about it.

Pirates vs Knights: The Hidden Heir

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Thanks for the feedback. I'll surely implement that in the coming chapters.