I like it, but personally if the chapters were longer I would like it more, and it does seem a little fast paced, but that's just my honest opinion, not me trying to be mean
"WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Gina let out an even louder wail, causing everyone around to cover their ears. Now they understood where Lucas got his singing skills from.
"But why did they beat you?" I asked as I looked at the wounds on his body. Tears started welling up in his eyes, his entire gaze filled with unshed tears.
Since it was raining a lot, Astri took the chance to read the first book of Lord of The Rings for Wayde, Zin and Lee, but also changed the species of the characters.
And unto the people, her wisdom glowed, Her voice, sweet melody to the ear, Proclaimed a message, crystal clear. With a heart as pure as the morning dew, She will bring hope and joy to the few. In times of trial and of strife, She is a beacon of light and life. Her name shall endure, forevermore, A goddess of wisdom, and a source of adore."