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Najicablitz626

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2023-08-02 JoinedGlobal
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    Great chapter and the grammar has improved. Did you use Grammarly?

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    I love the story and its direction. I like how it tackles what happens when Peter stops being Spider-Man and seeing the different reactions of the people around him. The gripe I have though is the incorrect grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to help clean up the text a bit. The text spacing could also be adjusted for readability and there are unnecessary indents. I also hope the different personalities in Peter could be more distinguishable in their words. I feel they all almost sound the same. This could be seen when Goku, and Natsu questioned who were the others who accepted the system. It felt copied pasted dialogue. The fight scenes could be more engaging and detailed instead of summarizing the result in a single paragraph or sentence. I hope to see more of the story and for the author to improve more in his writing.

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    Replied to AriosAeonVonBelser

    He did not get their DNA. He got the DNA of all the reptiles in the zoo before they arrived.

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    Replied to Eternal_Hellhound

    If you read ch 1 I did mention Hulk was still in the run and it was Captain Marvel who participated in the battle of New York.

    "No, but I think he is on our side."
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    Next chapter please!

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    Replied to Lee_mei_see

    don't worry I will eventually post it here in the upcoming days. you don't have to subscribe to my Patreon.

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    Replied to Lee_mei_see

    Ex-aid is already in my Patreon. as for Wizard, I plan to use him when the MC interacts with the magical side of the world I don't have plans for that yet. For Gaim, maybe sooner or later depends on how I write the scenes and enemies the MC will fight.

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    Replied to Conor_Webster

    Jean is in her twenties and a teacher. Her being part of the harem is pretty low. Depending on how I write future events, there is a chance, but she loves Scott, so I might leave those two as a couple. As for Wanda, I'm not sure yet. I'm still deciding her origins if she is with Magneto her father or the same in the MCU. Will see when I start writing her.

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    DGP player

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    Replied to CurseOneII

    I will post a pic soon but webnovel is having problems on pc

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    Replied to actinio_zirka

    I will give Gwen and Peter a driver sooner or later, so give it time.

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    Replied to WhiteDeath113

    Some Riders could reach that level in their final forms. Otherwise in their base forms they mostly are street level

    "Hey, I'm getting there. I'll be sure to surpass him soon. Just wait for my next armor. It is going to make your armor look obsolete."
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    Replied to KetchupChilli

    nope

    He kicks through Ox, destroying his suit, and falls to the floor knocked out. Gotchard stood still to calm himself after the fight. 
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