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Najicablitz6261dCommentedHaru was engulfed in a brilliant light, and as it faded, he found himself towering over the battlefield. He had grown to a staggering 50 meters in height, with galaxies swirling around him. In this transformed state, he now embodied the powerful presence of Ultraman Ginga.- Najicablitz6261dCommented"This…" the card had an image. It showed a humanoid creature with a red body and silver lines throughout. He had glowing blue crystals on his head, chest, forearms, and legs.
- Najicablitz6261dCommentedHis father's watch glowed and turned blue, displaying the text "UltraRiser" on its screen.
- Najicablitz6261dCommentedBeyond the boundaries of the colony, a mysterious, shadowy orb drifted through the vast expanse of space. This enigmatic orb was minuscule, just large enough to fit within the palm of a human hand. Glowing veins of potent energy crisscrossed its surface, and suddenly, it began to tremble and writhe. With an ominous surge, the orb expanded, its malevolent energy coalescing into a monstrous form. From the crackling energy emerged a terrifying creature, reviving the ancient Kaiju known as Chandlar. This colossal beast boasted two wings adorned with three razor-sharp claws each, adorning its wingtips and formidable feet. Its maw bristled with formidable fangs resembling mammoth tusks, capable of rending through solid rock with ease. Towering at a staggering height of 36 meters and weighing a colossal 15,000 tons.
- Najicablitz6261dCommentedThree additional flying objects arrived, joining the other flyers of the Core Splendor. They began flying in a straight line toward each other. The Core Splendor combined with two of the flyers to form a mobile suit, while another flyer attached to become the mobile suit's backpack. The Variable Phase Shift armor activated, and the mobile suit now had a red body with white arms and legs. The transformation of the ZGMF-X56S/β Sword Impulse Gundam was now complete.
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Gaia
The pilots swiftly started manipulating the controls of the Gundam, prompting the mobile suits to straighten up and stand 17 meters tall. As they engaged the Variable Phase Shift armor, the once gray mobile suits transformed as they took on vibrant colors - one turned a striking green, another a deep blue, and the third a sleek black. They were the ZGMF-X24S Chaos Gundam, ZGMF-X31S Abyss Gundam, and ZGMF-X88S Gaia Gundam. - Najicablitz6261dCommented
Abyss
The pilots swiftly started manipulating the controls of the Gundam, prompting the mobile suits to straighten up and stand 17 meters tall. As they engaged the Variable Phase Shift armor, the once gray mobile suits transformed as they took on vibrant colors - one turned a striking green, another a deep blue, and the third a sleek black. They were the ZGMF-X24S Chaos Gundam, ZGMF-X31S Abyss Gundam, and ZGMF-X88S Gaia Gundam. - Najicablitz6261dCommented
Chaos
The pilots swiftly started manipulating the controls of the Gundam, prompting the mobile suits to straighten up and stand 17 meters tall. As they engaged the Variable Phase Shift armor, the once gray mobile suits transformed as they took on vibrant colors - one turned a striking green, another a deep blue, and the third a sleek black. They were the ZGMF-X24S Chaos Gundam, ZGMF-X31S Abyss Gundam, and ZGMF-X88S Gaia Gundam. - Najicablitz6269dCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20: A Cold, Ruthless Guardian
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I love the story and its direction. I like how it tackles what happens when Peter stops being Spider-Man and seeing the different reactions of the people around him. The gripe I have though is the incorrect grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to help clean up the text a bit. The text spacing could also be adjusted for readability and there are unnecessary indents. I also hope the different personalities in Peter could be more distinguishable in their words. I feel they all almost sound the same. This could be seen when Goku, and Natsu questioned who were the others who accepted the system. It felt copied pasted dialogue. The fight scenes could be more engaging and detailed instead of summarizing the result in a single paragraph or sentence. I hope to see more of the story and for the author to improve more in his writing.
- Najicablitz62613dReplied to AriosAeonVonBelserCh 40 Chapter 40
- Najicablitz62613dReplied to Eternal_Hellhound
If you read ch 1 I did mention Hulk was still in the run and it was Captain Marvel who participated in the battle of New York.
"No, but I think he is on our side." - Najicablitz62614dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: The First Universe
- Najicablitz62614dReplied to Lee_mei_see
Ex-aid is already in my Patreon. as for Wizard, I plan to use him when the MC interacts with the magical side of the world I don't have plans for that yet. For Gaim, maybe sooner or later depends on how I write the scenes and enemies the MC will fight.
Ch 38 Chapter 38 - Najicablitz62620dReplied to Conor_Webster
Jean is in her twenties and a teacher. Her being part of the harem is pretty low. Depending on how I write future events, there is a chance, but she loves Scott, so I might leave those two as a couple. As for Wanda, I'm not sure yet. I'm still deciding her origins if she is with Magneto her father or the same in the MCU. Will see when I start writing her.
Ch 34 Chapter 34 - Najicablitz62620dCommented
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