Review Detail of Najicablitz626 in Spider-Man WEB OF Multivesal Heroes:Persona Nexus

I love the story and its direction. I like how it tackles what happens when Peter stops being Spider-Man and seeing the different reactions of the people around him. The gripe I have though is the incorrect grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to help clean up the text a bit. The text spacing could also be adjusted for readability and there are unnecessary indents. I also hope the different personalities in Peter could be more distinguishable in their words. I feel they all almost sound the same. This could be seen when Goku, and Natsu questioned who were the others who accepted the system. It felt copied pasted dialogue. The fight scenes could be more engaging and detailed instead of summarizing the result in a single paragraph or sentence. I hope to see more of the story and for the author to improve more in his writing.