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Reader beware: graphic child rape in this story The story was fun at first but the main character got progressively more creepy as the story progressed. The author lost me when the mc became complicit in child rape when the victim (a child) couldn’t pay to be rescued. Author displayed a further lack of taste by going on to describe the rape of said child in graphic detail. I feel cheated that I spent good money to unlock chapters and it led to this.
The writing quality is good and the characters are interesting. The story development leaves a lot to be desired. Per the author notes, “the story really gets started once the mc leaves the academy.” I’m at chapter 41 and I’m still waiting for the story to progress beyond the academy. At this point, it feels like the author is milking content to pad the duration without progressing the story.
The first “introductory” arc was great. It was focused, well written and moved the story and character development at a good pace. The ensuing story became progressively more bogged down in relationship drama, flashbacks and too much focus on side characters. I stuck with the story for a while in the hope that it would improve but I have better ways to spend my life.