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Review Detail of Edward_Endemano in Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess

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The story is interesting but the writing is bad. The dialogue is awkward to follow because of all the editorial notes that the author leaves in parentheses. It’s almost like the author did an outline and didn’t bother to flesh it out.

Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess

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