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Edward_Endemano
Edward_EndemanoLv1410mthEdward_Endemano

The first “introductory” arc was great. It was focused, well written and moved the story and character development at a good pace. The ensuing story became progressively more bogged down in relationship drama, flashbacks and too much focus on side characters. I stuck with the story for a while in the hope that it would improve but I have better ways to spend my life.

A Journey That Changed The World.

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NegansPalace
NegansPalaceAuthorNegansPalace

Each to their own. Thanks for the review.

DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13DaoistArbore

“Too much focus on side characters” is an embarrassing comment to leave anywhere honestly. Not all characters are hopelessly antisocial and burn bridges wherever they go…