I like it, the story is ok, it is unique and according to the author it isnt going to follow the MCU movies alot, and at the rate its going now I can see that he isnt lying

She also starts tolerating him later on, so its going somewhere

he gets the basic, immortality package, no aging, enhanced healing, and enhanced strength, for now... Now weapon, he would probably use a Bastard Sword, and will learn any magic he finds useful.

Might be anyone, except Yukihime, I dont know how I would get anything going between them so... sorry if you were expecting her.

lol ;-;

Yup.

I thought a SI story was a representation of the author in a chosen work. Ah yeah I just googled it and it says: "Self-insertion is a literary device in which the author writes themselfs into the story as a fictional character"

Will do, didn't know that counted as SI tho ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

if you're asking who is based of, I would say my brother, he is the person who introduced me to Webnovel so I decided to write a ff with a mc based on him.

This one, isn't, I dont really see myself in the mc, and if you are talking about the potential Negima fanfic it probably wont have a SI mc either.

well that does play a part, I will probably write another fanfic, on Negima tho, so look out for that, cus the fl will most probably be Yuki...

Perfection...

I dont know man, I really dont vibe with her, plus I would struggle to get anything going between them, when one of the main reasons for Touta's success is cus, he already had a good relationship with Yuki, and Touta reminded Yuki of Negi.

I dont know, but it definitely isn't Yukihime, leaning towards Kuroumaru or Karin

Maybe... maybe not... probably not.

months lol, didn't catch that mistake thanks man :)

good chap, but how did you manage to spell System wrong? and why is no body talking about it?