For Reference XD

You should improve the way you show the ch as the way you have published it just looks like a big para and for reference, you should read other novels so you can get some idea about it. Waiting for future updates. :)

No harem

It's seriously mesmerizing! The author brilliantly blends romance, mystery, and the idea of parallel worlds into one captivating story. The writing style is so captivating, and the characters feel so real that you can't help but get emotionally attached. While there are a few moments where the pacing feels a bit off, it doesn't take away from the overall experience.

Honest review The story so far is at a pretty good start, I liked the way the author make development in the story and the pacing is also done very well, just for the author if possible use the idea of not making the paras too big as at most of the time it makes the reader skip the details you worked on putting in, and also the world background part you can make some more improvement as providing a more description about the Mc's surrounding and all. But You have done an excellent work, and Waiting for more updates :)

The story development of the book is quite good, and how the author has made some new ideas for realms and explanation in the beginning I quite like it but there's still room for improvement. For Author -----> I quite liked you're way of writing and how you progress but from my point of as I read it I want to point out is the paras you have done are a little too big so due them being this compact it actually in reverse made me skip some details and also in some parts when you have done dialogues are feels a little out of place so if possible you should improve that also. But I enjoyed your story till the 17th ch it kept engaging as how the progress will be. Waiting for the updates XD.

The story is quite good and I liked the way how the conversations are added of the characters. For other readers, they should give it a try and at least continue to read so they can understand it better. For Author -----> This is in my opinion, the paras you have written are a little too big so it actually makes the one who reads them skip some details and there are some grammatical mistakes here and there which you improve also from what I remember in i guess it was Ch8 there you had provided a quest type of thing like Kill some and rewards thing, if possible to make it more eye-catching to the readers you can make use of these brackets '[]' or something else you feel good, as when I was reading it blended with the other parts you had written and I didn't remember it much. This much for now, still you have done good work.

As I normally don't read much of the novel where there is a female-lead but this one is quite a catch. The progress as how the story develops is quite good and all the minor details are also given. I would recommend that readers give it a read. This is for the Author-------> Speaking from as how I read it the parts where you have written the acts or scenarios and some paras also, they are a bit too big, which as a result causes one to skip the info you want to provide to a reader so I hope you improve, but still till the 8 Ch's I read they are quite good and also waiting for more updates

To be honest, it was my first reading a novel in this genre but it was good enough just there is something to say to the author that is the paras you have written are too big for me as I read I got confused about which line I was sometimes but still I liked the way as you made smooth conversations between the characters

This one is a good pick for other readers, in the Ch's I felt quite the realism, and also the pace of the developments is good so you wouldn't feel any rush. So I would recommend it for the readers to give it a try as you will get hung up on it as you continue to read. This for the Author ---------->

Hello, Author. XD I quite liked this work you have made, It's truly excellent, the way you write and also how you fluently introduce the characters with their characteristics and I am waiting for the next updates.

Hello, Author. So I read this novel and just one word to say that it's an excellent work, I quite liked the way you depicts every detail and when I read it I felt like making some resembling images in my mind as you had written and how you also provided some minor details as the sound creating due to some actions but also I want to say that the way you have provided and explained things are good but actually it gives away too much of information which in returns causes to one who is reading to lose interest and doesn't read everything, and also the paras are too compact, from my point of view when I read them they just seemed too much as they are a little bit long so if possible can u improve it Then again, I really liked the way you write the Ch's and waiting for more updates.

Ah! sorry I forgot I hadn't done the Synopsis yet

The novel is good, the thing I liked in this novel is as how the author fluently introduces the characteristics of the characters he introduces and the pacing is also quite good, but there is still room for improvement as first of all author should try to improve the grammatical mistakes he makes in the ch's and sometimes there is a lack of emotional impact from the characters and also this is for the Author --> You have made the paragraphs too long it actually makes confusion when they are together this much so as how I felt it would good if you make them of at least 3 lines and then space, then continue. That's all I wanted to say still you have made a good one

The book is good, as at the start the writing style was rough around the edges but now it has improved, You can see many minor details which many authors forget to add. XD So, I would recommend for everyone read it first and not just leave it in middle as it becomes more interesting with updates

Hello, Author thanks for a good ch

Hello! Author Keep it up for the ch's

Brother as the author has 2 novels so the ch's update will be slow but a good news from one of the both books 1 ch is going to be published for sure if we ask the author for it so ask him

Thank you the new Ch updates will be soon