Review Detail of Qilinblood in The System Killed Me So I Transmigrated

Honest review The story so far is at a pretty good start, I liked the way the author make development in the story and the pacing is also done very well, just for the author if possible use the idea of not making the paras too big as at most of the time it makes the reader skip the details you worked on putting in, and also the world background part you can make some more improvement as providing a more description about the Mc's surrounding and all. But You have done an excellent work, and Waiting for more updates :)