Review Detail of Qilinblood in *Survival* dropped.

The story development of the book is quite good, and how the author has made some new ideas for realms and explanation in the beginning I quite like it but there's still room for improvement. For Author -----> I quite liked you're way of writing and how you progress but from my point of as I read it I want to point out is the paras you have done are a little too big so due them being this compact it actually in reverse made me skip some details and also in some parts when you have done dialogues are feels a little out of place so if possible you should improve that also. But I enjoyed your story till the 17th ch it kept engaging as how the progress will be. Waiting for the updates XD.