Review Detail of Qilinblood in We Die Young

The story is quite good and I liked the way how the conversations are added of the characters. For other readers, they should give it a try and at least continue to read so they can understand it better. For Author -----> This is in my opinion, the paras you have written are a little too big so it actually makes the one who reads them skip some details and there are some grammatical mistakes here and there which you improve also from what I remember in i guess it was Ch8 there you had provided a quest type of thing like Kill some and rewards thing, if possible to make it more eye-catching to the readers you can make use of these brackets '[]' or something else you feel good, as when I was reading it blended with the other parts you had written and I didn't remember it much. This much for now, still you have done good work.