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Simon_Pelle_Hansen7mthReplied to V_ParadoxI think he did a little unofficial contract, because he asked what her wish was before hand if I remember right. And later gave her that lottery ticket.
'Wait no way! Is it going to be my first time without a contract?' Adam got excited but soon He felt Rias's body going limp causing him to hold her tightly, she had...- Simon_Pelle_Hansen8mthCommented
Not to be that guy, but didnt you just write 2-4 paragraphs earlier that the lord and his men came ON FOOT? So why a horse suddenly running off?
I called ancalagon over and I rubbed his snout and told him "Go and eat remember no people or horses. I will be here for the night, if you sense any distress from me or girl here burn everything. he gurgled happily when I was rubbing his snout but when he heard the part about burning the gurgle turned into a vicious hiss as his double eyes locked onto Hoster and his party of brave men. as soon as ancalagons eyes locked into the group I sensed two of them pissed a little bit but only stayed frozen. Hoster dismounted his horse as he felt it was about to lose its mind and the horse ran off back inside the castle while ancalagon took flight in search of supper. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen10mthCommented
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For that alone, Orell had his respect. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen10mthCommented
lol
"And what'll you be doing until then?" Muron asked. "You're not even old enough to wet your cock on a nice and wet pussy." - Simon_Pelle_Hansen10mthReplied to _MARSHEL_
Late, but it’s “invincible” on Amazon prime
"Huh," Tywin muttered as he fell to the ground dead. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommented
Lord? Think you mean king
~~~To the most excellent Lord Ronard Mormont, by the grace of the seven, the rightful king of the seven kingdoms, we can only hope to be faithful subjects of your grace, wishing to observe your reign following it with fidelity, wishing you health, we must say we have been misinformed and misdirected by the usurpers on sitting on your throne, we were blind but now we are not. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthReplied to SirSacrilege
Late, but the barbrey lady also got angry because of broken engagements and betrayed or at leas hated the starks
We could've forced her to come with us, she was still my daughter, my responsibility, but I didn't want her to resent me should he die. I didn't expect she would fall for him so soon, while it makes me happy, this situation makes it hard, especially since Cat was to break the engagement whether he survives or not, she doesn't consider him a good match anymore. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommentedMaester Cressen looked at Shireen with a heavy heart. "I have failed you, child. I should have found a way to help you. But maybe, just maybe, there is hope. I will write to your father and ask him to talk to the White Mage. Perhaps he could help you."
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthReplied to Kelvin_Ade
The guy named “the wisdom”
The word from Harrenhal is that the ghost has been acting up again and a servant got burned alive in her bedroom. In reality, she was paid off by one of my men and sent somewhere else to live and an already dead body from a natural cause was burned and left in her room. Things like this have been plaguing the Lothstons since I took up the task of acquiring Harrenhal. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommentedHe loved Jon, but Robb was his own, and whilst he would raise Jon well, they were not the same. Sansa as well. His beautiful little daughter. How he would do anything to see her as happy as she is now, for the rest of his life.
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommentedIt was a bit hard, but I tried to keep myself sober as I drove.
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthPosted
The story is good but it isnt written well. The sentence structure is really bad, the plot and such is fine imo since it is a fanfic, but the grammar/overall structure is so bad sometimes that it just takes you out of the narrative. Get a proof reader and this might be a 4/5 star story. Btw I got to chapter 23 before stopping. Plot (spoiler) Decently op mc but not to the point where he could just instakill night king and be done with it. Slow story but not to slow. Starts just before roberts rebillion with the usual saving of some characters
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommentedLakyus did not forgive Keno for keeping her true nature a secret and she left for the Slane Theocracy with her family. Ainz did not arrest her family because of the adventures they had spent together.
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommented
Pretty sure it’s slow is smooth and smooth is fast, but yeah
''I understand... Continue your mission Bravo, Smooth is Fast.'' - Simon_Pelle_Hansen11mthCommented[ALERT!! The SCP system has been successfully opened!]
- Simon_Pelle_Hansen1yrReplied to Thananos
Yep, every time author starts monologues I just skip because they don’t really add anything
All with just control of blood, Soon, I discovered the potential for a few of these hormones, like growth hormone or somatotropin, which is a peptide hormone that stimulates growth, cell reproduction, and cell regeneration in humans and other animals. It is thus important in human development. GH also stimulates the production of IGF-1 and increases the concentration of glucose and free fatty acids. It is a type of mitogen that is specific only to the receptors on certain types of cells. GH is a 191-amino acid, single-chain polypeptide that is synthesized, stored, and secreted by somatotropic cells within the lateral wings of the anterior pituitary gland. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen1yrCommented
Would have never known, thanks system.
Money indicates how much, the money you currently have. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen1yrReplied to Saltycarmel69
I’m no gun fanatic but pretty sure the gun author choose to use has some weird bullet that uses plastic in it I think making the bullet kinda complex but hey the did it in the show so why not
"Good. Have them begin work on that, but also have Raven begin to craft bullets. The more bullets the merrier." I told him. - Simon_Pelle_Hansen1yrCommented
You spend to much time narrating these dumb scenarios instead of just progressing the story.. why all this preparation before opening the door? I mean 2 hours ago he just showed how strong he already was and that the Edgerunners didn’t have a chance. And 5 minutes ago he also just boosted himself further with the system, it is just annoying how you write: (I am gonna speed story up as a endnote every chapter, only for you to spend 2-3 chapters on useless stuff)
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