This work is good and the character's growth is reasonable, I just hope it doesn't take too long for him to turn around and take revenge, I especially hope he takes revenge on the Hyuuga clan (since even most of the Hyuuga branch has already he was brainwashed) and I hope he takes revenge on Konoha, I'm referring mainly to the elders and hiruzen, I never liked hiruzen, he's basically a danzo 2.0 (he only knows how to say "everything is for the peace of konoha)

my only problem with this work so far was the speed with which the protagonist changed, he was just thrown in a prison (he wasn't tortured or anything like that, just a little despised) and he had an absurd determination to be strong, he was beaten and get up without any problem, like a warrior who participated in several battles, being just an otaku with a weak body/will, that was what bothered me most about this work, if the change had been more gradual, with him suffering and changing Because of that it would be much better.

I can't wait for you to make a jujutsu kaisen fiction, I find the way you approach the world of the works you work on very interesting, because of that the world of jujutsu kaisen would be very interesting. This story is very good like all your other works, I have no criticism (maybe just the chapter update speed)

This work is very interesting, in general I liked it, there was only one thing bothering me about this work, which is that the protagonist literally has the shadow clone, perfect for him who is a scientist/doctor and has a lack of time for experiments/studies, and he still So don't use the shadow clone, this is incredibly annoying, he could use it from the gym to either send the clone to the gym in his place or leave the clone at home studying for him, from the beginning it takes work he could do that (when he he won Ruri's shadow clone he had the chakra to make at least 1 clone) - this is my main problem with this work, not using the potential of the shadow clone, which the protagonist should have realized since he gained the jutsu, (seeing that he is a "genius")

I would say that the main problem with this work is the speed at which things happen, if it were slower, had more details, etc. it would be much more interesting (aside from the fact that the prota technique doesn't make sense in the jjk universe, that there is balance of the world but we see here that the protagonist has almost no restrictions, even Gojo does)

and I'm not a fan of the chosen love partner (my opinion, respecting yours of course) it's not bad, but there were better ones.

In general, a great jujutsu fiction, the development of power and the protagonist are good, the dialogues are good and the best character created (best adapted from the original work) is Kenjaku, he was very well done, he really gives off the vibe of 'everything as expected' without seeming false, the best adaptation of this work is certainly the kenjaku. - now my criticism - this work is very similar to the original work, there are small differences but it still follows Cannon a lot, you know? only later do more differences appear, but there still isn't a truly "Original" arc, you know? I hope it changes in the future

I HATE THIS WORK (There will be spoilers below, read it on your own) the story is well written and well done, it conveys the cruelty of the celestial dragons well (Very well) and that's what I hate, the torture is good, I've seen it in a lot of work and seeing the cover and the system I already expected it, but the rope(est@#po) I can't accept, I'm sorry but it's too heavy for me, and I jumped from chapter 3 to torture precisely because I saw the r18. The most annoying thing of all is that I read the synopsis and I thought there wasn't going to be R18, so I went to read it BUT then I see this Shit further on and I go back to see the Description and I thought there wasn't going to be R18 Consensual, I could have left more Of course (if you don't care about heavy character development stuff, like rope for MANY PEOPLE, this work is for you, but I can't accept it) - Written by Automatic translator

It has been an interesting read so far (chapter 34) the scenario in which the protagonist has delved so far has been well done, the dark continent has been well described and the protagonist, I confess that the protagonist I thought + or - he is a bit smart as he is at risk of life, but outside of these situations he is not one to think so much (because until now he has only shown himself in life-threatening situations lol). In general, I will follow the work

unfortunately I can't find it anymore, I don't think they put it on the website yet or the name is different

It was interesting at the beginning (I read up to chapter 9) it's a shame that a lot of things started to happen off-screen, for example: Naruto improving because of the protagonist (it didn't show) Hinata stopping being shy and becoming strong (it was just a comment, it didn't show the process of change) If there were more dialogues/character details as mentioned above it would be much better

I was researching SCP 169 on YouTube and I found something interesting about it, apparently there is a group of islands in the ocean that shake every three months, after the foundation evacuated people from the island and studied for some time, they found a theory that this tremor that happens every three months is SCP 169 Breathing. (I just thought it was an interesting detail, putting some details like that in the story would be really cool)

So, I dropped the book and went looking for another one about SCP (since I found the concept very interesting, since I didn't know much about SCP) and oddly enough, I only found one that was much worse than this one, so I decided to read it again and... the translation improves a little (the chatgpt descriptions decrease a little) so just ignore this strange way of narration that sometimes happens (in the current chapters I decreased it a lot) Overall, it's worth continuing to read even if the narration can sometimes be a little strange.

I really liked the work, I even went back to the mtl (which is undergoing maintenance) I hope the translation continues (especially the names which are a bit bad, I could fix them while waiting for the maintenance to finish)

Can you tell me the name of the original MTL?

until chapter 30 (more or less) it was very good, then the translation was horrible with chatgpt describing half of the chapters in detail an example: ricci - I think the guard of site 001 needs to be increased' says ricci with a dark melancholy and a touch of weight in his words, like the shadow of the night seeking to protect the light of the world' it would be like the example above after chapter 30, a lot of exaggerated description because of chatgpt, which is incredibly sad considering that the work was very good to read.

man, I'm saying that it doesn't make sense that she already likes him seeing how the previous Peter acted, and there wasn't much time in this body for her to already like the current and confident him (you know what I mean?) the flash part I thought was forced because it's really stupid for him to try to kill someone the way it was done in this story, and the beggar's part meant that his past hatred towards the company that the prota is going after was very "convenient". I hope you understand what I meant now.

I'm writing through the translator because I don't know English, the first 8/9 chapters were good, the development with Michele, the dialogues, everything was incredible, but out of nowhere it went downhill with his aunt starting to like him out of nowhere, fantasizing about him and etc. I was very disappointed but I still continued, then the flash tries to kill him, but I continued, and soon after a beggar saves him and we discover that the beggar has a history with oscorp and so on. In conclusion, it started well and became just another fiction without logical development (the first 8 chapters were on the way, a shame they were lost)

I saw that a new chapter came out and I came to say, where are the new chapters of the Aizen model? ?????????????????????????????????????????

I thought the story would be him creating a village and then some homunculi like Fate's to help him keep everything going (I thought about it because of the knowledge he gains, so I thought he was going to go that way) and then him making non-aggression/trade pacts with other villages, meeting characters and getting stronger and etc. But instead, the work is him collecting characters like Pokémon for his village and that's it, it's basically a slice of life of a very strong guy (he's literally enel lol) picking up characters for his village, that's all, it had a lot of potential, but it went down a very boring path.